It's short, but nice. I think it's cool that it's substantial despite its length. I like your detailed descriptions. I think those intricacies are things I need to practice on (colorful descriptions - especially with surroundings); I guess I usually focus on the emotional aspect and haven't really tried practicing on the former yet. I think it'll be fun. Thank you for being an inspiration and sharing your passion with the world.

A cute little story with a nice twist at the end - altogether a fine prelude of things to come. The facelift has worked wonders too!

Keep 'em coming ;)

It is me again! Soundwave 0107, here to review!

Well, the classic horror-movie-snuggle-strategy. Can't go much wrong with that.

Raven's attitude is in character: Annoyed by "scary" movies (Has she forgotten Wicked Scary already? XD)

But of course, hugs from sweet lil' Star make her happy. Good ol' Raven :D

9.5/10 for nice plot, grammar and chracterisation, though a little short. Great job, Crazyrabidfangirl! :D

Ah! So adorable! Not bad for a first try. You've been a good writer from the start! And now that I've complemented so much, I must now bury you underneath a thousand critics before I even think about giving you another complement! Bwah ha ha ha ha ha ha! Nachos!

this really brought a smile to my face. I couldn't help but utter a heartfelt 'awe how cute'

keep up the good work )

oh... it's very simple... but it has the spark...

But, as u said, it was the first one, so...

NOO! there's only one fic left! ToT

very sweet and a good insight into the little things we humans (and Raven) do to be with the people we care about.

awesome!

Haha that is hot. I think it could have been a bit longer though.

Sincerely

-Joseph

Aw, totally adorable! Love it! You're a good author.

Sandy

Really nice. It was really cute how Star did that. . I really liked it! Short but extremely sweet. Thanks for adding another fic to one of my favorite pairings. :)

cute[:

sorry my other account didnt type right i ment kinda sad to see it end

this was really good,kinda sad though,GREAT JOB!

This great. Maybe write a longer RavenxStarfire next time.