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Janissa 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love your story and hope you continue it. thank you very much for making such a wonderful story to read. It is a lot fo fun and i like how Ranma-chan is acting and how you have played her so far. One note err maybe more properly a request, based off a note I read prior to one of your chapters is I personnally think Ranma is much better off to stay as a female and not be changed back just becuase of a conception that Ranma must be a he-man must punch something image. I am looking froward to your next chapter. Ohh one comment i have is Ranma really seems to have an efinity for green based on how you discribed the plants reactions to her. But I do think that Ranma is and should have thought of Winter before Tofu. thanks again fro creating this very entertaining story Janissa
sherriam 2008-03-25 ch 6,	abuseThis was FABULOUS...stop what you are doing and start writing the next chapter...it is great!! I can hardly wait for the next installment...you really keep my interest with this story! That is really an accomplishment, considering I don't know anything about Magic...
Rose1948 2008-03-25 ch 6,	abuse::chuckles:: Wow... this story of yours is addictive. Thanks for sharing!
Dumbledork 2008-03-25 ch 6,	abuseExcellent. Can't get enough of this story.
Ignas 2008-03-25 ch 3,	abuseOMAKE :) As Ranma passed Kasumi's room he saw the door open a crack. Kasumi had been hiding in her room? “Is the doctor gone?” He heard her ask. “Yea he left just a few minutes ago. He was teaching me some wicked stuff with ki. It was like something out of a cartoon.” Kasumi looked relieved. “Are you hiding from him?” Kasumi lowered her eyes and stammered “No, I just. Ranma there's something different about him. Since he came back. It's like. It's like he's not Tofu, but someone else. It scares me” Some time later. "Ah Kasumi, fancy meeting you here" - said Dr.Tofu "And it seems that we are alone. Perfect, for what I intent to do." Kasumi steps back a few steps back. "Why, Doctor, what do you want to do?" - she asks slightly in worry. "Well it seems that you noticed that I'm acting a bit out of my usual character. So I think you will understand why I will do this ..." - with those words Tofu grabs something out of his pocket and moves quickly toward her. Kasumi's eyes widen with fear at this sudden move. As sudden as he started moving. Tofu stops, kneels before Kasumi and gives her a small box with diamond ring in it - "Kasumi will you marry me?" "Oh my" - sweatdrops Kasumi - "This I certainly didn't expected."
phoenix.ru 2008-03-25 ch 6,	abuse^_^ a couple of misprints can't spoil the enjoyment! ^_^
The English Speaking World 2008-03-03 ch 5, anon.	abuseI've really be enjoying your story. Well done. I do hope you go in to bigger and better things after you finish this. Thank you and best of luck,
deathgeonous 2008-02-23 ch 5,	abuseVery nice story. Thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Rose1948 2008-02-22 ch 5,	abuseI'm loving this!
phoenix.ru 2008-02-22 ch 5,	abuse^_^ it alive ^_^ thanks for another nice chapter!
sherriam 2008-02-21 ch 5,	abuseThis chapter was as wonderful as the previous 4 and has left me hungry for more! I can hardly wait! Fabulous!
Deepdream 2008-02-21 ch 5, anon.	abuseI really like the idea of a crossover between Ranma 1/2 and Magic The Gathering. In addition to that you've got a nice style of writing. One one hand you seem to rush one the other it never seems as like you're rushing the story. That's quite an accomplishment, you know? Most authors suck at this but you do it apparently with barely a thought. Just one thing: That short part about Ryoga being dead and eaten was a joke, wasn't it? Come on, Ryoga IS Ranmas rival. You can't just dispatch of him that easily. It would be way more interesting if he were to train and become something of a rumoured anti-hero or something and confront Ranma from times to times. But - like always - that's up to the author and that's you. Until your next update, Deepdream
Dumbledork 2008-02-21 ch 5,	abuseWOW. This chapter was great once again. I absolutely love your explanation of the Jusenkyo magic. That idea about curses being permanent an the original form just a glamour hasn't been done before and has a lot of potential. As for completely curing Ranma... well it's your fic. I for one am not really a fan of Cured!Ranma fics. The curse is in my opinion one of the main plot points in Ranma.
Sakura Lisel 2008-02-21 ch 4,	abuseWait a second, now I'm confused, because just WHEN did Ranma get a MALE fiance in this world? The only time it's mentioned is when he/she yells at Virvielle about not marrying one? There's no mention of Ranma's new fiance until after he/she yelled out that he/she wasn't going to marry the guy. Who's the supposed would-be-groom supposed to be?
mythicalprogrammer 2008-02-20 ch 5,	abuseNot much to say. Just fast pace I guess. I sorta wish maybe the next planewalking you would go into a bit more detail in the world. Like where he is? Is it like the plains land with cottages where human lives and it's nearby swamp where vampire and warewolves live. Just wondering if you going to make Ranma bard for money. Traveling dancer hehe (ragnorok). Are you going to do any story on lorywn, morning tide, or shadowmoor?

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