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peine Aider
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
you gotta continue the story! Its great.
Sword-of-Shin
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
This fic is excellent! The characters are perfect! I also really like the style of writing. And the story itself... the awesomeness astounds me. I really hope that there will be future chapters! This story BEGS to be continued!
tsukuYomi
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
Dude, I'm really loving this fic. Please please update!
Heidi the Odd
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Love it O:
Keep writing :D
Azakura
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
I really hope that you post future chapters! I absolutely love your language and the way you phrase stuff in this story!
DangoDarling
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
This a clever AU and I think you should really consider writing a second chapter, I really enjoy your work and I'm hoping to see you write some more.
Princesse Sarah
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
Aw c'mon, carry it on, we want to read about Tobi driving poor Dei nuts! ^_^ Loved this chapter, please upload, please *big bambi eyes*
wryter4-hire
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
zomg! How did tobi get his number hmm? -cant wait to see the next chapter- i think my favorite part was the fact deidara's last name is Bang xD perfect
anOnymOuS.080
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
Amazing. Fantastic. In my cousin's words, fantabulous. Can't wait for the next chapter! If I didn't know better, I'd think you're practicing the 'cliffhanger-no-jutsu'..Haha..
Childe at Heart
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
I'm not really a DeiTobi or TobiDei shipper, but the whole situation in the story is so amusing, I love it ^^
Chibi-Roy-Chan
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
wow i really loved this you have to hurry and write the next chapter please! Deidei and Tobi are so Cute togethern ^^
Shadow Reaper
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Please please please continue! I just spent the last hour looking for this fic (I've read it once before, but I forgot what it was called...), and I'd forgotten how much I love it! Ah, I'll just keep re-reading it until a new chapter comes... Anyways, I love your work!
Felosiyo-teh-ninjah
2008-04-07 . chapter 1
Oh my, I hope this isn't discontinued, cause I really like the plot of this thing. Go Nancy! XD I would very much appreciate if you would kindly decide to update. Thank you. (/silliness)
Hish
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
Seeing as you haven't updated this story yet, I doubt you'll continue it, but I really hope you do! I really like your style, and the story is fun. I can't get the image of Tobi leaning over the desk and Deidara looking annoyed out of my head.
midday.dreams
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
*falls to the floor*

Oh wow. This was hilarious. Absolutely hilarious.

Thanks for writing this, really. I can't wait until you have time to post the next one. :3 Great work!

Ja~Kaeli
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