 shadewatcher 2009-01-03 . chapter 1ahh, pillow dodging soo much better than dodge ball. that game can be really painful. |
 ChaosDisorder 2008-11-15 . chapter 1this is really sweet, try a LxM |
 Katanagirl16 2008-09-26 . chapter 1This was really good, How old are they? |
 Robina 2008-06-16 . chapter 1Woot for co-workers giving you ideas! And that is so totally Mikey.
And Leo stinks. Stupid kid, not even getting hit once. Meh. |
 The Light of Reason 2008-06-03 . chapter 1hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha-
Wow, I haven't messed up yet!
Anyway this is such an adorable story, I love how cute Don is, and how Raph is so...oh, I don't know, it's just he's oberprotective and unsure, and for Raph that's uncommon, making him seem endearing.
I know, big word!
Anyway, thanks for this story!
Peace out,
The Light Of Reason♪ |
 JohnnyMakesNuts 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Oh my gosh, beyond cute! Just when you think they can't get any cuter, they do! And that game sounds fun, I think I may try it with some friends, lol. |
 The ORIGINAL Corky 2008-03-09 . chapter 1*About dies laughing* This seems like a game me and my friends should have come up with when we were little! Except we probably would have ended up using her little brother as the target every time (we were so mean to that little boy...it's a wonder he's not more messed up than he is).
Now I wanna be 8 years old again and try this game out. It sounds like so much fun!! lol. And Raph and Donnie just keep getting cuter and cuter (so does Mikey but I'm rather biased ^_^;). Absolutely love it! |
 ChibiLover123 2007-11-27 . chapter 1^^Can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the good work!!^^ |