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| Renaissance IX 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abusesweet |
| Kyrie Twilight 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseplease please please, write more! This is a great story, i just want it to continue on ! |
| The White Tragic Wolf Sayan... 2008-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou described Kurama so well. I acutally felt like the character. I also smiled when i read the story. Hopefully I can get Kurama's personality described as well as you can. If it's not aproblem with you can you tell me how to describe him so well hes my favorite character. |
| Seiko_desu 2007-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked the layout, and how you portrayed Kurama! Only two minor mistakes, but we all make them, so it's all good~ Good job, and good luck with future fics! Ja ne~ |
| Silver Fox Trot 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, but loose the fan-girl Japanese. |
| Queenphoenix 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI don't like it. You're ruining a perfectly good writing style by trying to shove Japanese words in there. Stick with one language. Please. Beyond that... I'm not too familiar with Yu Yu Hakusho, so further constructive criticism is beyond me. Sorry. >_ |
| ToonyTwilight 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this oneshot please do more Kurama ones!! |