this story was absolutely beautiful. well written and very emotional. you have a great talent. update soon for you have an avid fan on your hands. keep up the good work.

Okay,
there is only one word to describe this:

WONDERFUL

and awesome, great, amazing, detailed, loving, and and...

yeah, thats more than one word, but I doubt you mind

^.-

I love it
so please update very soon and keep it up

bye
wasu

I think you are a very talented writer!
Great chapter!
Please, keep updating.

Great story! I appreciate how accurate and realistic you portrayed the characters. Update soon please!

i really like this.
it's well written,and i really like your portrayls of the characters.
it's realistic!
keep it up :]

Awesome, awesome writing

I can't even begin to imagine the love Ron and Hermione have for each other, and I can't wait to experience it

Are you going to be updating soon?

otherwise it was very well written and interesting

Just one thing...are you saying that Ron and Hermione had Rose and Hugo as twins, because in the epilogue it states that Hugo is younger. Also they didn't have a third child...only two. READ THE EPILOGUE HONEY!

hi

I love it
awesome ,really!!
so please update very soon and keep it up

bye
wasu
ps. brilliant work,really!

wow keep it up I want to read more. it is sad though.

This was beautiful! Very well written.

this was really well written. as a one shot i like the build up to the end and the symbolism. i felt that the last line was intended to make the readers emotion swell, or at least thats how i percieved it. i am a generally picky and judgemental person when i read fanfics and i'm never satisfied but i wouldn't critisize this one. it was written by someone who actually KNOWS how to write. well done! good imagery as well. and the bit about the hufflepuff pulled some heartstrings also.

Lovely!!
Why don't you keep it up?

Aw it's only a one-shot? Dangit! Oh well...great story though!