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Anon
2009-04-14 . chapter 5
"Chase glanced up at Wilson, marveling over his bang up job of looking shocked, dismayed and concerned. Man he should be an actor. He missed his calling in life. “See you at the hospital.” He climbed in the back of the ambulance and they sped off."

Brilliant =]
SV
2009-04-08 . chapter 8
OMG this was awesome! For next time, though, instead of Chase calling them ballhuggers, he would call them budgie smugglers; it's the Aussie term for those Speedo-type bathers :)
charlie
2009-03-18 . chapter 8
Hmm okay so not slash after all ;) I enjoyed it nevertheless and liked the ending, especially the reason House chose Chase as his doctor. The epilogue was fun although not necessary.

I wonder if you did write that sequel..

.. Thanks for a fun story!
charlie
2009-03-18 . chapter 5
I don't know how I missed that this is slash. Awsome! The whole time I've been thinking that now this is GOOD, but how much better would it be with a little bit of C/H action on the side.

You are a good writer because tonight I really wanted to read C/H pairing and instead I got caught on this. I hated the way Cuddy and Wilson treated House too, so the idea was interesting. But I didn't expect to read further than maybe first or second chapter. How wrong was I. Anyways, so far so good.
dzio
2008-09-08 . chapter 8
Okay, I haven't slept in about 48 hours, so I'm not to writing a real, coherent review right now. I just wanted to say that Chase's interview was freakin' brilliant. ;) LMAO, great job. :)
quack675
2008-06-10 . chapter 5
I know I already reviewed this at LJ, but I'm re-reading it and I just wanted to mention that I really liked the Chase/Foreman interaction in this chapter.
fullmetaldevil
2008-02-08 . chapter 8
WOW! Very interesting take on House, I like what you did with Chase's character...plus I really enjoyed your morbid epilogue...
Thoughts13
2008-01-04 . chapter 8
Really well done! I liked the epilogue as well, and well you just did a bang up job with it!
Fae Child19
2007-12-25 . chapter 8
Interesting epilogue. Loved the interview House gave, it was hilarious! Terrific story!
AccentFetish
2007-12-21 . chapter 8
Hah, I loved the ending =D
blackend
2007-12-21 . chapter 8
Sequel to Ducklings! YAY!! You just brightened my day up so much more. You've got wing baby!
Great chapters. Like I said, you never write to much. You always hold back. Great story.
C Elise
2007-12-21 . chapter 8
Great fiction!
Ivy3
2007-12-21 . chapter 8
Hmm.. The epilogue seemed a bit crack-y to me, what with the "if he didn't see the bys, what else was he blind to?" Plus killing Tritter after getting rid of him is a bit overkill.

"you should to tell your physician that your pain has decreased"- you should tell.

I loved the 'job interview'- it was so crazy and weird! I had a hard time picturing them doing this but I did wish it would happen.
geminiginny
2007-12-21 . chapter 8
HAHAHA!I hate Tritter, gum chewing bastard. Lol. Oh, Chase won't buy bagels! More fool him.
Schuyler Lola
2007-12-21 . chapter 8
Your epilogue made me laugh so hard. Hee!

I liked Chase and Cameron's conversation, as weel - plus House's snark this last chapter. I'm looking forward to more from you, later!
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