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| Fan Fan Girl 2007-12-05 ch 1,  | abuseHow come you're so good at writing about Xelha? Why? WHY? Now I have to debate whether or not to put this into my favorites and toss the other out. See, 'cause I like to have only twenty stories in my favorites list at a time... Just something I do. But this is the second awesome Xelha drabble you've turned out and now I'm at a loss. Which one!? Sigh. Anyways. Again, I love the opening. You tell everything as plainly as it is, keep it engaging, and focus on every important detail in the scene. And I LOVE the idea behind this: that Xelha is experimenting with the temperature and going to the very extremes to understand her own death. In a way, she's even torturing herself. I love how you depict Xelha... it's so awesome... I am truly jealous of you. :P Ah, what the heck. This one is a fave. |
| Ruingaraf 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Seems like something she might do when she was younger. |
| Strawberry Eggs 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWow...I must admit that it is unusual, but I wouldn't call it bad. Considering her fate, I can imagine Xelha doing just this, not once but often, as the time to release the Ocean draws near. There's something very forboding about this piece, what Xelha is feeling, I imagine. I actually thought this was pretty decent. :) Sometimes radom burst of inspiration can be a good thing. Serene: That's what WE keep trying to tell you. Yes, but do they have to be SO random? And so all over the place? |
| Legacy Now 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseMoko-chan: WOW! That was so vivid! You really captured the mystery of the long lost ocean! U GO GIRL! |