What I really liked in this specific Anime was that every person had a distict personality. Forsyth was probably a bit shallow and extended him very well.

I had a good laugh when the two were talking about Winia in the end.

Great story!

One minor mistake here:
In 7 Chris confesses to be a member of the Obstinate Arrows, but 6 already he tells that "The Baroness gave copies to everyone in the Arrows."

truly brilliant story. any fans of scrapped princess should definitely read this.

i really really like this. i think you have forsyth absolutely spot on. and chris too. i wish all this had been in the anime.

@_@ This was FANTIASTIC. My heart ached for these friends. I started to cry when Forsyth had to wait in the holy city... Not knowing whether or not your only friend was alive...

Anyway. Very beautiful.

Wow, I am surprised with the lack of reviews on this story. This story is wonderful. Very deep insight into a barely-covered character, and careful portrayal of Chris as well. I love your steady, calm narrative tone. Please do keep writing more Scrapped Princess fics!!