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| Ania Nicole 2008-09-08 ch 5,  | abuseGood story - I really hope you update soon! |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuseI like! Update Soon! |
| soccergirl004 2008-02-26 ch 4, | abuseJust wanted to let you know that the story is great. Your characterizations are spot on and yo do a great job with setting the seen. just one thing, it's getting tedious so you might want to bring in another dynamic or just move the story along. But great job, and congrats on a terrific story! Update soon Sarah |
| soccergirl004 2008-01-31 ch 5, | abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! this story is amazing! I cant wait for more :) |
| Time and Fate 2008-01-26 ch 5, | abusehey. i like this, so plz keep updating |
| fire among us 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseIt was good, the shoe thing was a tad confusiding, but it was still good! update soon! |
| onesmartgoalie 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseGood chapter. Update soon! |
| dragon slayer 4 eva 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseno oeffence, but not exactly up to par with your past chapters, just FYI... still - good. ds |
| Soccergirl004 2008-01-08 ch 5, anon. | abusemore, more, more! lol! that was great i really want to find out what happens! update soon :) |
| Nyx Wings 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseHeh. The science bits are quite welcome, for me anyway. I'm majoring in psychology. :) This was a good chapter. We see what's going on with Sarah and Casey, and learn Chuck's developing plans for escape. I have a suspicion that Chuck is just being tested somehow. Grey would probably anticipate most escape plans. Very cool, and I'm definitely looking forward to more! |
| TakeshiKovacs987 2007-12-28 ch 4, | abuseThings are starting to get a little more exciting here. Keep at it. |
| onesmartgoalie 2007-12-25 ch 4, | abuseWow. This story is very interesting. Update soon! |
| gaaddict67 2007-12-23 ch 4, | abuseNice twist! Definitely can't wait for more! |
| Soccergirl004 2007-12-18 ch 3, anon. | abusethis is my favorite chuck fan fic right now! please tell me you are going to keep writing because i realy want to find out what happens to Chuck and Alice! p.s i know chuck doesnt really seem like the kind of guy who would save the day but maybe just this once he could be a hero. |
| Aki and Tenshi 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseTenshi: I probably shouldn't review without even reading the rest of the chapters yet, lol, but I feel the need to say first that it's lovely to see a male writer on this site; there aren't enough of you! Also, you mentioned that your birthday was Jan. 6, 1989. Mine's January 5, 1989! Lol, I always get excited when I see someone with a birthday near mine. I love the first chapter! I found the line: "Who do you mean when you say, ‘they’? I know they aren’t with the government, and telling me your name is ‘Grey’ leaves me stranded in a…well…a grey area, so to speak…” very Chucklike. Now I'm off to read chapters two through four! |