 M3lanch0ly 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Eh...? It isn't Silver...? I'm kinda sad nyah... >W< And Diabolic too...? >W< None of the pairings are greatly favored, but the dry humor attempted is rather refreshing! |
 LiQuYu 2008-01-09 . chapter 1lol. You can never be bored with Rikkaidai. ^^ Yukimura got all worked up and Sanada already knew. lol. Yukimura's leaving... I wonder if he'll meet Echizen in America... hm... My favourite part... hm... I think it's battle between when Sanada told Yukumura that he already knew and Yanagi's explanation what happened to the rest of the team and the Silver Pair while Sanada and Yukimura were MIA.
I really enjoyed this drabble. It amused me from beginning to end. Well, onwards!~~`* |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2008-01-01 . chapter 1Nice story! Have I told you belated happy new year already? if not then belated happy new year to you! |
 poakkis 2007-12-14 . chapter 1Really, can't help but love Rikkai
I really liked this, especially the war part! I totally laughed my ** off as I imagined them fighting each other with small, furry tennis balls xD |
 Dawn Ruichen 2007-11-29 . chapter 1Pretty neat. I liked how Sanada asked Renji if he lost everyone. |
 juz-a-reviewer 2007-11-28 . chapter 1hihi!! I like this fic! I juz like yukimura sanada fics... haa... they turn me into mush... |
 lolorama 2007-11-28 . chapter 1Behind him, Niou and Akaya high-fived. “I knew there was a reason I let you live,” said Niou, with what passed with him for pride.
Aww! HaruAka friendship! It wasn't much, but I really liked that quote for some reason... Anyway, I enjoyed this drabblething, Haru and Maru would certainly make a 'near flawless team' in battles (haha, I'd love to see them in action) and the SanaYuki friendship was pretty cute! Can't wait for the next addition to the series! |
 Ahotep 2007-11-28 . chapter 1Twas great. Poor Sanada... He should have kicked them out. It would have been the best for his sanity.
The strange relation between Niou, Ootori and Shishido is getting on me. The more I read about them the more I like them.
Now my favorite part : "“I knew I should have just kicked them out,” Sanada told the ground by his feet. Sighing inwardly, he got out his MP3 from his pocket and let his collection of old jazz soothe his poor, battered mind."
I hope to be able to read the next one soon |
 Hropkey 2007-11-27 . chapter 1"Yukimura opened his mouth to answer, but Sanada cut him off with a sigh and a long-suffering shake of his head. Yukimura never had to do anything. It just happened. The boy was the embodiment of completely, meticulously organised chaos. Chaos so neat and tidy that it put the Chaos Theory to shame, butterfly or no."
Honestly, I meant to review this earlier T_T But I had homework. Stupid homework.
Anyways, I'm a little sad we didn't get much of the Myth Triangle here (which is what I'm calling it from now on), but this was pretty brilliant, as always. And yay! Slight SanaYuki! Add more plz? I need Sanada to be with *somebody* after that Tango Pair tragedy. Which still makes me sad. Damn you.
The email thing was pretty amusing too. None of my friends have email on their phones (we may live in a wealthy suburb, but we're middle school students, and we're not *that* wealthy), but I can imagine that if that ever happened, I would've liked to crawl into a hole. Forever.
My brain is fried from homework, so the ramble is short today. I wore a beret to school today, and I got called Frenchie all day. Multiple times by Frankie. During class, in the middle of the teacher telling us what we're doing for the food drive presentations: "Wait, you're French?" Walking to PE: "FRENCH GIRL!" "I'M RUSSIAN!" "I DON'T CARE! YOUR HAT! IT'S LIKE MADELEINE FROM THAT CARTOON! IT'S FREAKING ME OUT!" |
 serenitatis417 2007-11-27 . chapter 1The teeny, weeny SanaYuki hints made me happy. :D
It was slightly dragged on, but otherwise it's quite good.
I'm starting to feel slightly sorry for Sanada, going to have to manage TEH RIKKAI without Yukimura. But he'll get by. [In one piece or not...]
Update soon! |
 Ryuu Amethyst 2007-11-27 . chapter 1Technology hates Mura and he knows it...
My fave part:
“No,” Shishido growled. “That was Kirihara, actually.”
Behind him, Niou and Akaya high-fived. “I knew there was a reason I let you live,” said Niou, with what passed with him for pride.
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Never in my life I would 'see' Niou and Akaya high-fived each other. Shishido should've stayed out of the war. It's bad for his health.
Rikkai's secrets of excellence is due to the fact that the dimensional fields are weaker in Rikkai.
Now I know... |
 awintea 2007-11-27 . chapter 1Oh, Mura and his lack of wonderful awesomeness with technology. xD Murphy's Law is quite horrible, as it is just too true. xD
Shishido is so cute as well~ XD Shishido works so hard xD
Well. XD I liked it. I feel as if this review is too short. XD
-awinchan |
 scorch66 2007-11-27 . chapter 1Your updates always make me smile and laugh like an idiot.
Fav line: ‘You don’t need to bother explaining – you’ll only raise your blood pressure.’ and " With practised ease, Marui flipped him off with one hand and waved apologetically to Sanada for swearing with the other. "
PS, I think your use of 'infringing' (another great line by the way) was correct. :) |
 shadowinRW 2007-11-27 . chapter 1“'Mist? Who, me? No, no… this is just my… weekend outfit. Yeah.'”
"Routine had to persist come hell, high water or UFOs. Or rain-mist."
Brilliant. I annoyed my roommate by laughing again. Oops. Anywho, I was wondering if the team knew about the Niou-Shishido-Ohtori (can never spell that name!)...erm...thingy. So, if they don't (and even if they do) it would be amazing if we could see the team's reaction when they find out about it. Yeah? Okay, I gotta go figue out how to turn an analysis of Descartes and St. Augustine into good creative writing. Bleh. |
 Fallen Bridge 2007-11-27 . chapter 1just for the record (this comment is for sanada) i would totally hangout with niou vointarily! he's just so...niou-ish! |