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| kinnik72 2007-12-04 ch 11, anon. | abuseVery interesting way of working in D&D into the myth of SG. It was an ejoyable read. |
| Blood Dragon JL 2007-12-03 ch 11, | abusea crossover with stargate atlantis/sg-1 will be perfect for sequel of dragon hunt don“t you think? |
| MasterMenthe 2007-12-02 ch 12, | abuseAh. Two people. I see. I loved this story, and if you want to make a series, go right ahead, I'll be there to support you every step of the way. If not, little is lost, due to the excellent ending. I thank you for sharing such an original and well written story with us on Fanfiction(dot)net. Please continue to write freely , and do not be afraid to share your stories with the world. -MasterMenthe |
| Blood Dragon JL 2007-11-30 ch 12, | abusejust for short and clean my doubts all your story will be a high possibility for crossover between of them for your next creation? and for the story are you kidding all your masterpieces are great for read one and another and another time without tiring of boring |
| Count Boobu 2007-11-30 ch 12, | abuseImpressive. Most impressive, if I do say so myself. ;) |
| Nzie 2007-11-30 ch 7, | abusethis is really inventive and unique! I just read this all at once- good work. I think the discussion of flying things may be the best part of the story- really fun. good work. ~Nzie |
| MasterMenthe 2007-11-28 ch 3, | abuseBTW, due to a mistake on my part I forgot to mention something in my Chapter 4 review post. The Atlantis Stargate may be the original, but the other Stargates on Earth were placed there by the Goa'ould (how do you spell that?) AFTER they flew there by 'conventional' means. Also, don't ask me why the Russians have a Stargate, they just do. -MasterMenthe |
| MasterMenthe 2007-11-28 ch 4, | abuseI like this story, both for its amazing originality and the level of skill shown in the writing. But you have me slightly confused...it seems there are two important peices of informations you've forgotten. 1.)The Russians have a Stargate too. 2.)The first Stargate on earth would have been in Atlantis, not simply buried, and most certainly not with a Jaffa (yes, it IS two 'f's, and not one). By the way, are you changing the Ancients? Because by saying that the Stargates are capable of going anywhere, whereas all other known forms of transportation are limited, would that not mean that the Ancients are more than simply advanced? I suppose you could make it so that the Ancients had access to the knowledge of the Ascended, but as far as I know that simply isn't true. Always remember that this is a fanfic, and that means free usage of the term "artistic license". |
| Gaereth 2007-11-28 ch 4, | abuseFinally got around to reading this latest story. I must say, well done! I've always loved Stargate, and WoW has become a big hobby of mine, so it was cool to see them together! Your writing is as excellent as ever, and I look forward to reading more. Great job! :D 'Til next time, Gaereth |