 obikidoragon-to lazy to log in 2009-05-11 . chapter 1 Honey Flash, CCS, and SM. |
 yue no rei 2008-10-06 . chapter 1Ahahahaha xD let me guess, Sailor Moon, Kinomoto Sakura and I have no idea who the last one is xD |
 Anonymous 2008-06-02 . chapter 1 Dammit, now I want to see a Cutey Honey FMP crossover. |
 Miss Lorah 2008-05-03 . chapter 1"Parts of the story are mildly off-color, by inference. "
Haha, now that i look back at it, I find that to be pretty hilarious, and smart.
I learned something while reading that xD Way to go!
Anyways, a really funny story without being ridiculously over the top. I enjoyed reading it ^_^ |
 DancingBrain 2007-12-03 . chapter 1Can't tell what the second one is. |
 daniel-gudman 2007-11-30 . chapter 1“Right,” Ryo said, seconding her friend. “Some people don’t like long-winded explanations and things in their stories.”
You are a very cold man.
Anyway, #1 was Sailor Moon, and #3 was Cutey Honey, but #2 isn't ringing any bells for me.
And, having read this, I can't believe you actually had the gall to say "Parts of the story are mildly off-color" at the beginning.
Whatever. It was funny. |
 SinRaven 2007-11-30 . chapter 1Sailormoon, Honey, Cardcaptor Sakura |
 Stahn Aileron 2007-11-28 . chapter 1I've been following your FMP fic since I first found your FMP fics, back in like 2004...You never disappoint, I must say. ^_^
As for the References: Sailor Moon, Cardcaptor Sakura...And I don't know the third, but I'm guessing it's Cutey Honey from another reveiweres guess.
MORE FMP!
Oh, BTW, is it "Mizuke" or "Mizuki"? I keep thinking it's supposed to be "Mizuki", as I've found that to be a fairly common Japanese name...I should re-watch my FMP someday to clear that up on my part.
Anyway...Always waiting on more! |
 junyortrakr 2007-11-28 . chapter 1It figures that Sousuke's going to be in trouble with Kaname pretty much no matter what he does. |
 Onhiro 2007-11-28 . chapter 1Wait, if you are talking about the anime novels, the cover art was done by the author/artist of the story, was it now? As was all the seperate color pages in them...wow, Sousuke should have won.
KEEP ON WRITING! |
 vic 2007-11-28 . chapter 1 wow. the only one that i get off the top of my head is the Sailor Moon reference.
I love esoteric humor and breaking the fourth wall. the serious ones are a bit more of a mind bender, like Sophie's World.
Once again a quality amusment that acually makes me think. Thank you |
 Bella-Rose 2007-11-28 . chapter 1 Well the first one was obvious, Salior moon. But i don't know the other three. Funny story, fourth wall breaches usually end well :P |
 sabacat 2007-11-28 . chapter 1LOL This was a GREAT way to start my morning! I could just picture Sousuke the entire time! You definitely crawl in their heads when you write!
Great fic! |
 Hildebrant 2007-11-27 . chapter 1 Off the top of my head the two references you used were Sailor Moon and Cutey honey. The "Surely Everything will be Alright" goes over my head, sorry must have been watching too many violent anime and not enough shoujo anime, and I aim to keep it that way. Just as I hope you aim to keep on delivering more and more of the best FMP and Naruto fanfics on this page. Keep up the good work |
 NefCanuck 2007-11-27 . chapter 1Oh geez... for *Kyouko* of all people to make the inference that "The carpet didn't match the drapes" BWAHAHA!
Hrm, I'm pretty sure there's a reference to "Earth Defender Mao-Chan" in Kaname's choice of clothes and accesories... but I can't get the other two references sorry ;)
Well done once again... |