Loved it! Loved Rodney's POV and him thinking about all the ways he's almost died in Pegasus :) Excellent job, thanks!

Aww love it! With the fainting and such!:D

Good story. I love the quote at the beginning.

That was sweet! Keep it up. Maybe we can have McKay rescue Shepard?

I can see Death playing chess with Rodney and John and losing soundly. Those two would be like Bill and Ted on 'roids. In fact, Carson is there, going, "Nae, dinnae be takin' the lads. Ye doon't want tae be messin' wi' the likes o' trouble they wi' bring ye."

Great!

Oh, well done!! Loved Rodney's POV on the prospect of getting his brains eaten out! The last little bit, between Rodney and John was great! Thanks for sharing with us!

I love the last line. It reminded me of Death in the Discworld novels.