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| Welcome to the World 2008-06-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseToo fluffy for my taste...I was hoping for an unhappy ending, but I need fluff every now and then...I read too much angsty fanfics around here. And Vaan...I feel so sorry for him...one of these few moments for him to wish that he was just clueless. I love your fanfics...you're a really talented writer. :D And I'm just bad at it. xp |
| Kay Chan 2008-04-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseI achally really like this story :D wasnt as fluffy as some stuff ive read, it didnt make me nasuaus at all^^ You portrayed Larsa perfectly i thought ^^. Well done i really enjoyed reading it Rock on!! xx |
| Serenity Komoshiro 2008-04-13 ch 3, | abuseDOWAH! I just started playing FF12 and got to the part where Penelo and Laras meet...I NOW SHIP THIS PAIRING!! All thanks to you! *cries tears of joy* I want more, I want morree! Oh, look! Its 4am...*passes out* |
| Cable Fraga 2008-04-11 ch 3, | abuseThat was so sweet! I really loved it! Stories like these have made me a fan of the Larsa/Penelo pairing... And happy endings are fun!! ;) |
| Zaz9-zaa0 2008-04-11 ch 3, | abuseWow. I do believe that this makes the myth of happy endings actually existing in FFXII fandom a reality. Penelo's determination to face her grief, and her resentment for the consuming pressure of the guilt she bears was wondefully expressed throughout the course of her farewell ploy. Course, while Vaan's lovably witty -or dull-witted, you decide- antics (and the last line he could have coined: Best. Possible-ending-line. Ever. ;P) came as a fine set of humour within the reversal of roles and the impromptu dishwasher-guise, the focus kept on the topic of Penelo and Larsa's 'last goodbye' was never deterred nor lessened from its poignant, center-stage presence, which did all the more to make the final scene of revelation, reconciliation, proposal, and acceptance the memorable, joyous ending that it was for the two lovers that fate loves to set on the misinformed path now and then. ;) |
| Zelkova13 2008-04-11 ch 3, | abuseThat was so sweet and fluffyness! ^_^ I loved the first one, and this one is great, also! I'll definitely be looking forward to any new fics from you! :D |
| Kay Chan 2008-04-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseCool i love the story^^ cant wait from the next part^^ Rock on!! |
| das eulchen 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abuseWhoa, that's a very great story, I just can't wait for it to continue. So great! |
| celeste9 2008-03-11 ch 2, | abuseI'm so happy you're writing a sequel! I enjoyed "Payment as Repayment", it was very sweet, so it's nice to see what's happened to Penelo and Larsa. You mentioned that you like writing Vaan, he's also fun to read! He just doesn't think before he opens his mouth. I liked this chapter, though it was a bit wordy, more telling instead of showing. Although I suppose if you had some exposition to get through, at least you had the excuse of Penelo thinking. :) I'll look forward to the next chapter! |
| Sho-ro Eyez 2008-03-06 ch 2, | abuseOh wow, I'm really quite excited about this story and I really hope you update it soon! I really want to see where this goes. =]] |
| fighter-chick 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is a cute story! I love the end of the chapter where Ashe and Larsa don't believe Penelo and Vaan even though they've been best friends forever. Very cute and I think you did a very accurate portrayal of Penelo. |
| Zaz9-zaa0 2008-03-06 ch 2, | abuseI very much enjoyed reading 'PaR', and I'm doubly overjoyed that you're writing a sequel to it! :D Truly, I love how you've added in little allusions to Basch/Ashe, all while keeping the topic of Penelo and Larsa fully intact and central, what with the dreaded marital blight threatening their relationship! (And you've got 'Von' in perfect character; in addition to his cooking 'skillz' and what mischief he drags poor Penelo into. ;)) |
| Lunita Cero 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI'm very sorry to see the lack of reviews for this wonderful sequel, but please be aware that you have an avid fan already! I would really enjoy to see where you go with this, as you have proven that you are such a great writer. Please continue? |
| Tiger5913 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseYay! You wrote a sequel! And it's going to be a multi-chapter story! XD Ooh, I detected a hint of jealousy in Larsa and Ashe when they caught Vaan and Penelo playing around, hehehe. ^_~ Those two had better behave themselves, or Larsa and Ashe just might have to lay down the law. :P Please update this soon! |
| Iria 2007-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseo I'm so happy for a sequel! But I need more fluff ;) |