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| An-Jelly-Ca 2008-03-21 ch 6,  | abuseHe was actually surprised when Joe’s expression cleared up and marveled, once again, at how much faith Joe put in him. He always believed, no matter if they were cornered by a gang of grave robbers or alone for Thanksgiving, that Frank would bail them out. And, whether in spite of or because of this, Frank usually did, sometimes pulling through by the skin of his teeth, but he always managed to get out. Somehow. Fantastic chappie! I loved it! :) |
| Jimmy Candlestick 2008-01-25 ch 6, | abusepoor Frank. i liked this chapter a lot. of course, i like every chapter. anywho, i am a bit confused. are these a series of flashbacks before Joe is carried home half-dead? |
| EstellaB 2008-01-23 ch 6, | abuseNO KILLING JOE. Please? I don't know if I can cope with the trauma of Joe Hardy dying. I don't love him quite as much as Frank or Nancy, but I do love him dearly :D Also, I'd love to see someone from the Nancy Drew verse in here, particularly Nancy. Poor Frank. He needs somebody that won't do rash things and gets themselves killed... actually, saying that, Nancy'd probably be a bad choice. But I'd love to see her here anyway. |
| Red Hardy 2008-01-22 ch 6, | abuse"Later, Frank wondered if he’d said those things because he knew, somehow, that he wouldn’t have much more time, if he had known, before it happened, that Joe was being thrown into something that would cost him his life." --WAHT?! ACK! That is a cruel place to leave off! Is Joe going to die too? I loved Joe's unshakable faith in Frank whether it's saving Joe's life or saving Thanksgiving! :) And the way Joe sort of cringed when Frank used one of Laura's favorite sayings. That was so sad and so very REAL! |
| KCS 2008-01-22 ch 6, | abuse-Yip of surprise- I loved it til that last line! You're not going to kill everybody's favorite blond detective, are you? Sheesh, have a heart! -KCS |
| MeadowLark4491 2008-01-22 ch 6, | abuseYou're not really going to kill him are you? I hope not...I think Frank wouldn't survive it...anyhow, well written once again. please update soon. |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2008-01-10 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter, I love, love, love the story, update soon! |
| whitetigers 2008-01-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat chapter! The part about Frank touching Joe and wanting to know that he was okay was...i broke. :( Great job! |
| bgeesfan 2008-01-09 ch 5, | abuseNeat chapter--I like how you didn't elaborate on what Joe told Frank; I assume we'll find out as the story goes along. Please update soon! |
| Jimmy Candlestick 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abusethat was awesome... |
| Red Hardy 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseYa know I was fine until I read this... "Frank put a hand on Joe’s arm, emotions welling up inside him, coming too quick to identify. He just had to touch Joe now. To prove that he was okay." Now I'm a blubbering pile of mush!! That is just so... so... WAH! |
| MeadowLark4491 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuse*low whistle* You sure know the meaning of "suspenseful chapters" doncha? Bravo on another well written piece of work. Please update soon. |
| metascrawler 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseThis is bad. High school kids in a drug ring.. and even prepared to kill for it.. :( Yeah - like Frank, I don't like this either. It's just too risky for Joe. (By "This" - I'm just referring to the situation they're in; not your story. If you want to know - I do like your story pretty fine.. :) Update again soon please. |
| ShinigamixGirl 2008-01-04 ch 4, | abuseO_O Whats going to happen next? Its so interesting. I cant wait for you to update. :] Poor Joe...Go Frank go! Protect him. ;D |
| MeadowLark4491 2008-01-04 ch 4, | abuseYou are so evil to Frank. I don't know whether to applaud or have your hide. I love the way you dig into the relationship of the two brothers. I'd kinda like to see a bit more from Joe's perspective, but other than that? great job. Keep up the good work. |