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| Cascaper 2008-06-08 ch 2,  | abuseOh jeeze. Poor little tom-kit! *pets him* Many typos, but I don't want to waste review space or sound like an English teacher. Not when I like the story so much. |
| Cascaper 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abusePhew. For a second there I thought Mac was going to go totally ooc on us, but when he tried to kill Misto-eh, Quaxo, sorry- it was pretty clear that wasn't going to happen. So that's all good. As is the plotline! Run, 'Lonz, run! |
| Ponygirl101 2008-02-05 ch 15, | abuseI loved it Plato is just evil I know. Misto and vicki for ever, jade and jazzy sound so cute, I really adored this story |
| Misto4Ever 2008-02-04 ch 15, | abuseJeez two ne chapters AND an epilouge? I love it! lol I'm glad you finally finished it, its one of my fav cats fanfics I've ever read. And just so you know when I do finish my story and upload it on here please don't think I stole the name Jade cuz I've had it in my notebook for a while now...Just to let you know ^_^ I really love this story and I can't wait to read another one! |
| Zapharina 2008-02-03 ch 15, | abuseYay Jazzy, you did it! You already know what I thought of the ending, but I'll say it again- this was a really cute story. And...Misto with kittens...aw! |
| LC Cowgirls 2008-01-29 ch 9, | abuseWOW! I like it so far! |
| Misto4Ever 2008-01-13 ch 12, | abuseYay a new chapter! This one was pretty cute with just Alonzo and Misto. I feel really bad for both of them...'Lonzo must really like Cass and I know Misto really likes Tori...I hope both problems are resolved soon. |
| Zapharina 2008-01-08 ch 11, | abuseHeya Jazzy! Your first chapter really made me cry...poor little Quaxo. I think this is a good example of why he needs two different names...when he becomes Mistoffelees and gets his magic he's a little more confident. Quaxo is more of a kitten and a victim. But I'm really curious about what happens next...I've never been a Misto/Tori fan in general, but I'm starting to like this Victoria as a character on her own. So keep writing! Please? With sprinkles? |
| Misto4Ever 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseHiya Jazzy! I still love this story but if you don't mind can you please email me? I need help cuz I can't figure out how to upload a story onto (this site) |
| Mystery-Rainbow 2007-12-23 ch 9, | abuseHi again, well i've read all the chapters and am confused. You started out with Quaxo and Alonzo running from their father and quaxo being really shy. Suddenly as soon as you have him meet Victoria he changes character and so does your plot. You have two different plot lines in this story which means that you could make 2 different stories out of this one. One where like the start of this story and another where Quaxo is not as shy. For me it's a bit confusing reading the story. It's not bad at all just inconsistant with your description and the first chapter. |
| Mistoffelees' Magical Sweat... 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseI seriously thought i was going to cry when Macavity was beating little Misto! it was SO sad! I hope that wasn't the end because it was sad too (even though i don't think the Misto&Victoria thing works, but I'm just weird like that). I loved this story and i u could keep it going and i would read it forever. |
| Tomato-Vampire-Countess 2007-12-01 ch 6, | abuseI love this! Please, keep writing! |
| Tomato-Vampire-Countess 2007-12-01 ch 5, | abuseIs it over? Because I love it...And right now I'm left handing...PLEASE IF THE STORY ISN'T DONE, COMPLETE IT! I BEG OF YOU! Oh, I'm going to be putting out a story called 'Macavity's Daughter'... |
| Mystery-Rainbow 2007-11-30 ch 4, | abuseI want to say two things to the author of this story. First i'm sorry if i seemed angry but i have seen many stories stolen before and wanted to make sure that wasn't happening to you. Second your story is very good and my interest is peaked. thank you for writing and also thank you for answering my post. i will keep reading your story now that the issue is cleared up. like i said my interest is peaked so i can't wait for more chapters and stories from you. |
| Jellicle Yule 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseIts a great story so far. Poor Misto *glomps Misto* I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon |