I love how you've wrote Naru, he's so in character! And everyone else, but Naru in particular since he doesn't really talk much in the manga and anime. A lovely story, brilliantly wrote.

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! XHolic! Do i get a cookie?
and seriously, so funny. I can totally see Naru using those justifications to date Mai! And I love Lin!

this story is good
but i was kinda wondering where you got the information? some of this is a spoiler right? i am trying to find sites where i can read ghost hunt but i just cant seem to find any.
will you please help me out?
love the story
~riane

Woah! Getting a little ahead there, isn't he? Well, more like WAY ahead.

Good all the same, though.

I've only seen the anime (have not read the story at all) so I only have that to go on, but based on his character in the show I can not see him doing or thinking any of what he did or thought in here.

Is he somewhat different in the book?

But besides that, this was good fanfiction.

Oh man, if that's true (which it probably is) that would be the sneakiest, most underhanded plan of tricking someone into dating I have ever had the pleasure of hearing.

Sounds wonderful ... and very hilarious.

Can't wait to see how that plan goes.

Oh my ... oh g... Oh jeezuz.

That was ... completely ... totally ... out there.

[laughs]

Wow, I wonder if a person could actually think in such a way. Good beginning though. Can't wait to read the rest - really, can't wait.

Naru is so perfect in this!! I'm very glad I stumbled across this fic, because you've done a very good job at portraying him. He's so humorous in his arrogant, organized way. Also, I love that you did the bits from Yasuharu and Lin's point of view. They were amusing and spot on. Thanks for a good laugh and read!

hehe John with a super soaker...G.I. JOHN! that'd be awesome!

AWESOME! Amazing story! I had so much fun reading it!

GYAHAHAHAHAHA! Hilarious! This really does seem to suit Naru's personality!

really good look forward to the follow-ups :)

BWAHAHAH!! poor lin!! he needs something more like one of those coke and vodka things! naru *tsk tsk* is just so naru!

Excellent work!
I really enjoyed reading this!
Thank you!

Planning for the future eh Naru? XDD
Ah this was awesome. I look forward to the follow-up.
I have one question though. In the end did he did he actually have something for her or is she just his test subject or whatever? Thanks.

-Reviewer. :P

Hm. I need to say it. Naru is unbelievably not OOC. Like, he acts exactly how normal Naru would act. Treating Love and Girlfriends like test subjects. And the entire file on Mai. Nice job Naru. Your just SO awesome. xD