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Eighties Capricorn
2008-10-07
ch 1,
abuseMy new absolute favorite Beetlejuice/Lydia fic. Lovely writing. Interesting plot. Keep up the good work. Please update soon! =)
missBENNETT
2008-10-05
ch 8,
abuseThis story is seriously and amazingly awesome. I've found something to laugh my ** off about in each chapter, so kudos to you! Beej is wonderfully in character, which makes visualizing what's happening even easier. Update this soon!
DP-shrine-in-closet-girl
2008-10-03
ch 8,
abuseGood story! Can't wait to read more.
IrethFalassion
2008-09-29
ch 8,
abuseDavid just keeps getting creepier, it's almost funny how he stalks Lydia. But no one is allowed to call her 'Lyds' but one guy and we all know who that is. He crossed a line.

It's been awhile and I don't really remember, but didn't the Maitlands cross over or the end of their 125 yrs was up... Anyways can't wait to find out why they're back and what Lydia is going to say.

Cheers!
watergoddesskasey
2008-09-29
ch 8,
abuseawesome chapter!
LynetteRowan
2008-09-24
ch 8,
abuseI love your story. Its great that you blend the cartoon in with the movie. Brilliant, really. Anyways please please please have lydia call him back. Cuz if she doesn't then that would be bad. Anyways please keep writting.
Ninnik Nishukan
2008-09-23
ch 8,
abuseStill reading this story, and it's still my favorite Beetlejuice story.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I'm also starting to wonder if David is possessed or something.

Very good kiss scene-- nice description.
CobaltHeart
2008-09-23
ch 8,
abuseI really like the title for this chapter.
Probably more than I like the chapter, which is saying alot.
Gosh darn, what is it with the name David?
Pooky The Kid
2008-09-22
ch 8,
abuseOh, wow! You updated for this story... EXCELLENT! Great chapter! What an interesting twist. I thought BJ was just messing with Lyds in a playful way, but this is intense. You gotta post another chapter soon. Hopefully, you will give Beej a chance to take revenge on Babs and Adam... Where in the hell (literally) were they anyway?
neko-setsuka
2008-09-21
ch 8,
abuseOMG! I KNOW WHO SENT HIM BACK! OwO BUT WHY? DX IT WAS GETTING TO SUCH A GOD PART. XP

I love how this is turning out and I was so excited when i saw that another chapter was uploaded. ^_^
I can't wait to see more. :D
badkidoh
2008-09-21
ch 8,
abuseit's still great so update soon!
AnthyRose
2008-09-21
ch 8,
abuseOMG.

The end of this chapter literally left me speechless. BJ kissing Lydia? I was waiting for that! All the tension from the other chapters finally exploded...or atleast partially. And when he was suddenly sent back to the netherworld, I was actually screaming. They'd made so much progress...I wonder how far this will set them back? Lydia's already so confused...

I'm assuming that it was Adam and Barbera who sent BJ back; Lydia has some explaining to do! But I wonder how it was that they were even able to come back? (Adam and Barbs) And are they here to stay? Certainly I could understand their distrust of BJ, and his responding dislike for them. On a side note, I love how you address the age issue between Lyds and BJ. With him, (in a previous chapter) remarking that back in his day she would have been a marriagable age.

And what is up with David? 'Do you like me? Check yes or no' LOL...I cracked up at that! That is SO elementary school. Seriously though, it's almost as though he's been posessed. I wonder if some outside force is influencing him, or if he really is just a creepy, stalking, jerkoff.

Lastly I was surprised to see an update so relatively quickly. Usually when I find a fic that I like, it ends up only being updated once or twice a year. I'm glad you didn't make us wait that long, but at the same time, as a writer myself, I know that one can only write when one feels the desire to.
WithoutHesitation
2008-09-21
ch 8,
abuseI so look forward to these updates, I really do... I grin madly here, and wait for more!
Undoubtfully-Insane
2008-09-21
ch 8,
abuseWHAT THE ** **.

>w< You have the best one liners. I LOVED the chapter. I hope Lydia doesn't get into TOO much trouble...
howsentimental
2008-09-21
ch 8, anon.
abuseNO! Dammit! Aragh! Excellent, if terribly frustraiting, chapter! Poor BJ. Please keep it up! :) I'm looking forward to Lydia's reaction!
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