marvelous

Very nice, got here via your page on HF. Even though I've yet to have the pleasure of seeing Black Lagoon myself, I hear good things. And this little one-shot, though brief, is actually very well-written. And despite your opinion that you are "not all that gifted with smut", I think you did pretty well here. Sometimes it doesn't have to be overly graphic to be good, ya? Excellent work! d(^_^d)

... :0...:)... Can I say THANK YOU!

this is my opinion but probably i like this fic is due to the reason that you connect the anime with the fic, which is good, and this fic gets you to think a lot. Well, i liked it. =D

FOO U KICK **! I CReaMED MYSELF! lol Cuse I love Revy, shes the type of women i want homie! Keep it up!

Wow! There really arnt that many RockxRevy lemons and this was a good one. I really hope you make this one-sho tinto a series.

this one was hot and sexy just the way Rock & Revy should be. this is great work. you have to do another one. oh and i like the character Axis and the comic she's in that you made are you going to continue it because i would like to alot more of the Axis and her story.

I love the fact you nailed both of their personalities perfectly. Rock is not some "Shinji-clone" some others make him out to be. And Revy's just nuts.

While I do love this pairing, in all honesty if rock ever hooked up with Revy his life expectancy would drop til about the next time he ** her off. And every guy ** of their girlfriends.

Loved the fic.
Akolyte121

more please

Wow. That is all that can be said. I really loved it; you completely nailed their personalities. Great work!

wa!
i can't belive it!!
it was incredible!
i loved it!
and the last part qhen they were together!

hope you to writte more!ª!
ja ne!
conchito!

that was amazeing i hope to read more :D

I only recently got into Black Lagoon...(like saturday...) but I'm a big fan.

You did well with description, and while normally the use of slang can break the flow of a work (especially in a description heavy scene like love making) it fit with this one.

I really enjoyed it and hope you write more, as one smut writer to the other.

Awesome story, awesome choice of song.

Loved the writing, very detailed. You did a really good job of creating an atmosphere for the whole thing.

Very well done.

heheh, this was skillfully written that speaks of great talent of the author!
you stayed true to the characters personalities, though short was never a dull moment, and i find myself envisioning as if i was there!
awsome :D