i love abarat storys

i love this fic!

very good chapter, well written. i do like the poetry a whole lot. plz keep it up. your pretty good w/ carrion. its awsome!

I like the story, but there's one thing that bugs me. At certain times Marina will claim herself as a normal girl, even though she used advanced dark magic. That's not exactly what I'd call normal.

Other then that, you're doing good.

Oh no! Although I feel sorry for her being taken back to Midnight, I'm so happy she's going, I really want to know what happens. Still loving the poems, and the writing is great, thanks for updating!

omg! i really like this story. it's very good. update soon, then! :)

I lov ur story, but i hate ur cliffhangers. plz update soon

I have to say I really like this story so far. It's well written and I like how it follows the plot from the two books. I thinks it's really clever

Excellent chapter! I’m intrigued by Carrion’s cloak, what a cool idea. I like how you write your chapters, leaving on cliff-hangers. So, what’s going to happen now?

ooh, what's he want her to make for him? Ah, I am so excited that you are writing this fic, I'm loving reading it already.

Great set up! The wormwood is giving me the creeps. I'm thinking it would be pretty impressive sight, such a large warship, especially seeing Carrion on board too.

great story!

I really like this story so far, please continue

Great job for your first fanfic. I really love it so far (especially the poetry). Please contune!