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appa-appa-away
2009-10-24 . chapter 16
What's happening with Hakoda and Ursa now? *eyebrows go up* Lol, ok. That sounded cheeky.
Hi, yea, me again, back to give you another review. I'll finish the story eventually! Even if it is ia very long and slow proceedure, obstructed by school work and other such social events, I will do it! Lol, I'm gonna push you over the 1 200 review mark ^_^ How cool's that gonna be?

Anywayz, great chapter. Love Bumi - who doesn't?!
And zuko... tsk tsk, all worked up over Fadmon... no sense of humour. but then again, it would be pretty bad to be gossiped about... especially if they're going as far as to make a headline like "Jetko - the new zutara?"
Lol, brilliant chapter (per usual). I'll read more soon. And keep reviewing ^_^
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-03 . chapter 15
Lol, his spleen shivered. ^O^ lol.
:S What's happening here? Azula's heartbeat changed so Toph couldn't tell it was her at first? O.o WHAT DOES IROH KNOW?! I wanna find out... lol, I'll have to keep reading, huh?
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-03 . chapter 14
Aw... Haru... so cute ^_^ He's worried for her. (bahahaha, bahahaha, he's worried about losing his hair! Bahahaha!)
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-03 . chapter 13
O.o so... what IS going on between Sokka and Azula..?

Well, looks like Katara and Zuko are getting things sorted out ^_^ sorta. Good advice from Toph much. lol.
Um... yea, from what I'm reading, I probably couldn't stand five minutes in the Fire Nation palace without bursting out into laughter while THEY are at it! Hahaha. Lovely.
Great chapter, per usual.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-03 . chapter 12
Um... did anyone else call out the TOO MUCH INFORMATION ALERT?! Lol, brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. I loved it. :D Toph is da bomb. Katara... haha. OH, and I loved your opening line!
Toph doesn't knock. Doors open for her.
Haha, it sounds like a Chuck Norris joke ;) Nice going.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-03 . chapter 11
'Fadmon, your ass is mine.' I LOVE IT! lol.

Of course Toph would be there at the click of a finger. Lol, love her excuse too. ;D
Hahaha, trust the Cabbage man and the raving crazy foaming-at-the-mouth Kyoshi Island guy to come up with some gossip rag like that. ROFLMAO.
Great stuff.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-03 . chapter 10
Hahahahaha *chuckles continuously*. Oh Zuko, you are precious. ^_^ Poor Haru... Poor, poor, sexifine Haru... Toph Rocks - pun intended.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-02 . chapter 9
Lol, ah... yea, I feel sorry for the guards who stumble upon Iroh when he's ... eh-hem, imitating the flowers... hm!
Ok, Azula's starting to freak me out. She's up to something very, very evil. Iroh, yes, definately bring your own tea and snacks.
Haru, QUICK, GET RID OF THE SEXIFINE MOUSTACHE! Lol, sexifine. Love it - I saw the YouTube vids for that ;D Funny stuff. Good stuff... Poor Haru.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-02 . chapter 8
The crazy bitch is going to start the war again, isn't she? Oh Dear Agni... lol.
Can't wait to read more.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-01 . chapter 7
Naw, that was sweet ^_^ Lol, It's always about the sex with you, isn't it? I love that line! Hahaha.
Seriously, all Zuko needs to do is start ASKING and he may well learn what he needs to get Katara to 'present'. Lol.
Awesome chapter.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-01 . chapter 6
“Sex.” He stated it flatly. “You came here to talk to me—the brother of your wife, my little sister—about sex?”

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. You are commical.

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appa-appa-away
2009-10-01 . chapter 5
The eels and the flowers lecture. Lovely. Hahaha, oh trust Jet to be in the concubine's quarters. Yes, Zuko, stay away - so lucky Katara didn't catch him there. And if I were Zuko, I don't think I'd like the idea of Jet 'feeling' me at all either... but I'm a chick, and Jet's a hottie, so...
Ah-hem! Yes! As I was saying...what was I saying? Oh right - the review! :D Yes, great chapter. Brilliant, per usual ;) mhm.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-01 . chapter 4
Mai's garden. Enter at own risk.

LOL! Hahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaha! X'D Lovely. Classical. Loved it. You know you're awesome, don't you?

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appa-appa-away
2009-10-01 . chapter 3
I love Azula. XD She's so ... what's the word? Promiscuous? Lol, we'll leave it at that. I love her ^_^ raunchy too ;D
Another brilliant chapter.
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appa-appa-away
2009-10-01 . chapter 2
Ah... interesting. Lol, it must have been a very errotic love song from the singi horn for that servant girl in the palace to orgasm on the spot. Lol, I love this stuff. XD

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