I didn't find that cheesy at all, and I liked it alot!! Thank you!

This is brilliantly written!

Great story can't wait for next update.

omg awesome

Aw!
I have no idea who the heck Spawn is or the mythos behind him, but this was cute.
I looked him up on Google Images, so I could picture him properly. He's one bad-ass looking dude.
X3

It was a nice story. There are not many Spawn fanfics on the website, so it was nice to see a new story up. Very descriptive and that helped to "paint" the image.^_^