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Anna McNarin
2009-11-14 . chapter 15
Congrats, this is the first story I've ever read where I've mentally screamed out "damn it!". I rarely ever, ever find a writer -on line or published- that uses words I don't actually know and for that I'm thrilled. At the same time, it does tend to seem like you're trying to hard, only I can't bring myself to care as I'm too busy enjoying the story. What I do care about is that it's been almost a year, hence the mental cursing, since your last up date and that I've reached the current end. I subscribe in high hopes.
irishrose411
2009-11-10 . chapter 15
Will there be more to this fascinating story?
Spinner's Beginning
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
I love this story and have read it a few times. It was one of my favorite stories. I hope you update, but I have a feeling it is abandoned? Well anyways this series was really precious to me so if you ever get the feeling to write again I would greatly appreciate it. :)

Love Spinners Beginning
GoldenPhoenix 12
2009-10-30 . chapter 2
I've read this series through twice now and I love it. I realize hat real life plays a big roll in whether you are able to update, but will you update? This is a wonderful story, and I don't want it to go unfinished.
CrazymangoeswithHPGW
2009-10-28 . chapter 15
please update asap! This is a great story and I really like it and I think that you need to continue now!
xEferiellax
2009-10-15 . chapter 15
Nice one ^^
MJ
2009-10-10 . chapter 15
Thank you so much for writing. All of your stories are great. Please do me a favor and update this one. Also, the journal thing is cool, and I like to see Harry getting close to Snape. I like that Harry is slowly recovering... But please, more tea talks! I love them! They are so very Harry and Snapaliucios!
Thanks
MJ
ceara1888
2009-09-30 . chapter 15
AH! Why did you stop? I was very much enjoying your story. Please start it up again.
Lizzete
2009-09-25 . chapter 15
Great job, I can't wait to read more!!

Congratulations :)
mworth1019
2009-09-10 . chapter 15
I hope that this is not abandoned I really like it..
sweetysmart0505
2009-09-05 . chapter 15
And now I've finally caught up on your sequel! This sequel is, so far, just as good as the first one, if not better!
I can't WAIT to see what you do wtih Draco (though I think I can guess.) But seriously, I LOVE Draco's new attitude towards Harry!
I think it would also be cool if Harry got physically sick, like a cold or flu or pnemonia (because of the cold outside) just to REALLY put another damper in Harry's recovery by forcing him to be inactive at times where he should be going through physical therapy and magical stengthening while still staving off nightmares.
Anywho, don't want to tell you how to write YOUR story. So, I'll let you get back to writing (which I hope you're doing, because I am now officially following this sequel and I can't wait for another update! Even though you haven't done so in... 8 months or so? I think...) Though, let me know if you don't plan on continuing this. Just send me a little note either way. That would be really appreciated!
Anywho, great series of stories here. I think you're an amazing writer.
Kristine Thorne
2009-08-25 . chapter 15
Wow, I absolutely love this story, as well as its prequel. Fantastic.
SnapeFanatic1
2009-08-25 . chapter 15
I love your writting. I've read the story before this one and it was great. I'll probably read it again. Hope you update on this story soon, I'm really enjoying it. The relationship that you've developed between Severus and Harry is great, seems really well planned out.
Araea Swiftwind
2009-08-22 . chapter 15
Well...I hope you continue this...as it isn't...and I'd like to finish reading this...it was good.
Araea Swiftwind
2009-08-22 . chapter 14
Some mild progress made. Always good.
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