Wonderfully done. I love the way you interpret silences for us, and make a scene that we have already seen hold so much more. I always wondered what the look Mick gave Beth before he left her on the balcony was all about. I have my own thoughts about it but you translate it beautifully here.

More from you maybe? On either this or another story?

oh, I love this scene and you really caught the spirit of it. i hope you'll write more moonlight-stories in the future?!

Interesting take on the scene:)

Beautiful, love the angst.
Write more Mick/Beth please.

oh my gosh. that a;most took my breath away! you have a natural talent, my friend. i hope you write more, you are an amazing author. you captured that scene prefectly!

Wow! What an in depth account of just a few moments of time at the end of the show. Amazing what a creative mind can do with a relatively simple scene between two people. Good job, Kate is Lost!

DUDE! me too... I hate Coraline with a freakin' passion. I hope she dies, a slow painful death. I was angry with Mick for a while, but he's too hot and vampire(y) (I have a weakness for dark hair and blue eyes (and vampires)) to stay mad at him for more than 5 seconds...
ANYWAYS! I love how you captured the passion of Mick and Beth. I want more.
BS25

Aw! This has all the romance and heartbreak of Beth/Mick at their best. Thanks, I needed this after the last episode of Moonlight. (I hate Coraline!)

Oh, this was lovely. You captured that spellbinding scene with skill, and added your own magical touch. Your pacing was slow, building the heartbreak, letting it pour over the reader. You have a true gift for romance, Moonlight romance in particular. I hope you write more, and have more reviews rolling in.