Wow. Just... wow. I loved this so much I'm kind of in that sort of hazy state from reading it. The language was intense and strong without being over prose-y, if that makes sense. Simply amazing. :D

♥ SHELBY ISH MUH OTP GIRL SAY WUT.
Where have you been? I've missed you
so very, very much. Of course I won't
cuss you out! What person in their right
mind would cuss the person who just came
back and composed this masterpiece :)

JEEZUMS LYKE WOAH TIMES A MILLION BILLION.
I should expect something this amazing to
come from you. And and AND Axel and Selphie
for the ultimate win. That was really wicked
awesome super duper cool of you (because duh,
you just roll like that, you know).

All I can say is WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU SO
FOOFING MUCH I COULDN'T SURVIVE WITHOUT YOUR
PWNFUL KINGDOM HEARTS FANFICTION OH YEAH :3

AHSJGDJGGD, YOU'RE BACK. ♥ ♥ ♥!

This was lovely--gorgeous and captivating. There are so many lines in here that are AMAZING, and I especially like "Neverland is made of simple things and paper dreams and everything leads to something new." Very, very nice! How you come up with this stuff never ceases to amaze me~.

I'm happy you're posting stuff again! C:
(ExcusemewhileImakeoutwithyoupfftahahaha)
[le FAV]

OMFG YOU ARE ALIVE.
& brilliant
BUT ALIVE.

i loved this.

Cryptic. Emotional. Open ended.

I have a strange affinity with pieces like this and I don't know why.

Selphie in Neverland was a stroke of genius on your part. Never thought of that, I must say.

I also must say, the line: "...and they get along great because sunlight and fire are one in the same..." was just amazing.

I liked the way you described the most minute details.

Nice job.