I'm TOTALLY willing to help you out. I really love the story's plotline.
I have a couple of ideas on where to take it. I know it's hard to stick to one plotline and actually get satisfactory results with it :)
I'd dare to take this story under my wing!
If you want my help, I'm totally here. I can send you a sample of my writing, too.
Just PM me and let me know :]

Humph. I liked this fan fic. You should continue it! I like Lucus but i dont thnk hr should have been henry's brother.

NO! NO !NO! You can't do this to me I love this story I gasped out loud when they walked in with the demons why? what's going to happen? are henry and lucas going to interact alone? whats going to happen with mal and luke? and what's up with the demons? these are all questions I need answered so please please please I'm praying you get hit hard with inspiration before I have to cry.

P.S. I usually hate stories told using first person but you did it so well I wasn't bothered by it all GOOD WORK can't wait to see what's next

I'm really new to the site, but I fell in LOVE with your original characters. Mal is amazing and Lucas... well I have a bit of a crush on him. I understand the lack of inspiration, but should it ever strike again, I eagerly await reading more.

Jessica

I'll hold my breath as long as I like. I love this story way too much not hope that you won't update for another few months or more. I am still on the edge of my seat from the last chapter, please listen to music or something as a muse to inspire you.

please, I know inspiration isn't a definate thing just try please.

brunette-in-black

I love this story.. The more I read it.. The more I enjoy it.. I can't wait to see what happens next... I am dying to know Henry's reaction to Lucas and Mal.. I wonder what's going to happen between Lucas and Mal... ok.. I'm curious about everything.. :)

Please Continue..

OMG! what are they doin in that room! what does it all mean! whats gonna happen! please, please, please post again soon! im lovin this atm an im all like OMG! SO MORE PLEASE, THANKS!

I must say that I have read almost all the stories on this fanfic site so far. You are one of my top 5 favorite authors here. I love the way you put yourself into the story. That's what makes a good writer, when you can picture yourself with or as one of your characters. Putting yourself there gives the audience an actual pure image of the story.

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.. You so Rock.. Cant wait for more.

PS. Am cracking up at your Bio. You remind me of most of my friends.. Don't worry its a good thing. And no.. I'm not a stalker. LOL

Ta,
Selena A

Henry! Lucas! Come on guys, it's been centuries--brotherly hug or something! Well, I guess they're kind of preoccupied now, but maybe a little reconciliation after the bad guys are squelched.

Crap times 4 and double that too!

Yep, its me, the longer chappie voter. I will abdure to your expertise in the matter and live in hope for more.

Great stuff!

Hats off and bow.
P.

i freakin love this story.
the way you describe Lucas is AMAZING!
lol. update soon!

longer chappies please...

I so love this tale.

Glad to hear your wrist is doing a bit better. Rest it in between writing so you can write more.

Thanks P.

Nice to see you back! Good chapter-I can't wait for Lucas and Henry to meet!

Good to see you back! Thank for the new chap. that was great as usual!! Can't wait to see what would happen when everybody meets up :)!!

again i must say one of the best blood ties fanfiction i have ever read. I am so anixous to read the next chapter plz update soon. And i wouldn't mind if the chapterswere longer i can't wait to see when Henry and Lucas meet up again after all this time. Will the fact lucas is practically a werewovle and his brother a vampire effect their relationship?