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| Elisa 2008-03-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is great:) I really like this story line you've come up with. You could start a whole series or at least some more chapters (*hint, hint)! Keep up the good work:) |
| Nyx Wings 2008-02-29 ch 2,  | abuseVery cool. This is a nice addition to the story. I'm greedy tho, I still want more! Maybe a chapter set further in the future, when Dean and I guess Sam as well discover Mary's secret? I'd love to see them with wings. :) It would be interesting to work in Dean's deal too. |
| dean494 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I think it fits Dean and the way he is. Your description of the baby and his realationship with his grand dad is really nice. I wish you could fill us with what happened when Sam arrived and six months later after the fire. |
| lime juize 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseYou did an absolutely great job on this fic really I just love this take on Dean!! |
| Ghostwriter 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseWow. Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Ikchen 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuse*stares at the button* Seriously! ^^ I love your fic! Can't wait for mor :) |
| Elliesmeow 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseLoved it. More please? Sorry so short, gotta go to work. REally ethough. I always thought Dean was "special" too, nice to see a fic take that seriously.;) -Ellie |
| snarkNsass 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseI loved your explaination of Mary's origin. Supernatural just gave us a hint and then abandoned it. UGH! So where does Dean's bad boy behavior come from? Is that sequal material? I have about a page of questions which means that I really, really liked your fic. |
| MDarKspIrIt 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter... Not so sure the necklace will be useful for the second child though. Hope you'll continue this with a third chapter! |
| Katrin Van Helsing 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseWow this is beautiful. Great how you even got it so that Bobby might be the one who got given the necklace. Hope you update quick |
| anon 2007-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! Come on we've all seen that boy! He's part angel if ever there was one! And if the show ever goes in that direction with him, I'm totally backing them on it. After all Mary still has a secret. |
| SupernaturalGal6 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseabsolutly loved it! you should write a sequel where dean has to take the necklace off... |
| TCB 0.5 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuse*gives in to the puppy-eyes* ;-) Your story was really well told and moving. Interesting idea on how everyting came to pass, too. The only two things I feel kind of uncertain about is the angel theme to both mother and son, and your mentioning how beautiful her child was seemed a bit overdoing it. Sorry, Dean's really good-looking, no doubt but... Thanks for putting this up; it was truly a good read, especially since it was your first 'real' story. |
| pandora jazz 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed your story. I loved the twist about Mary being an angel and Dean too. So cool that his grandpa is an archangel. I think Dean is just as important to the story arc as Sam and wish he and others believed that too. I liked the description of Dean's green eyes and what we mortals will mistake for freckles. Thanks for the smile and sharing your story with us. |
| chibi 2007-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseits really good. maybe u can write a sequel to it. maybe sam doesn hv the full characteristics of an angel. just some power still inherited. the demon try to get his hands on whatever they can yada yada...n when dean takes the necklace off yada yada...oh yea...how it mite change the event where he sold his soul...how grandpa saves the day, hahahhaa cool...so much ideas to expand on this story man...you should really go on with it...lotsa ppl will be waitin for it |