Reviews for Sweet bug bones

I do have a name 2007-12-02 ch 3,	abuseaw, it's cute.
Chameron4ever 2007-12-01 ch 3,	abuseOoh, suspense! I like the plot, but there are a couple things... first, Booth this the only one who ever calls Brennan "bones." Zach and Hodgins always call her "dr Brennan." Second, I've noticed some spelling & grammar issues... nothing major, but I think a beta reader could really improve the story... just to catch the stuff you don't. I hope I don't sound too over-crirical... these are just suggestions. I'm a beta-reader myself, so I tend to be kinda nitpicky. :)
EmeraldMagick 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abuseZach/Hodgins, Zach Sweets... a little love triangle huh? very interesting... Can't wait to see where you take this :). ["You're giving me that look." "What look?" "...That look when you've figured something out." Zack pointed out, taking a sip of his soup. "Didn't know I had a look." Sweets spoke, taking the cup from him and throwing it in the trash. "W-Wait... What was that?"] - snickers That was too cute :) No-one seems OOC to me so far.
Chameron4ever 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseHm... Zach/Sweets is definitely a very odd pairing. This is looking interesting, please update!
JantoFan1311 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseYay some Bones slash def not enough out there plz update soon xx