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| fanpire ava 2008-09-03 ch 5, | abuseANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER I LOVED THIS ONE. UPDATE SOON POR FAVOR |
| fanpire ava 2008-09-03 ch 4, | abuseOME! THAT WAS SO SAD. I LOVE IT! PLEASE KEEP WRITING. IM EXCITED NOW |
| narutoluvin101 2008-09-01 ch 5, | abuse...dang...this is a really good story! ^-^...hope you update soon...onegai! |
| Shubaltz Crazist 2008-08-30 ch 5, | abusePoor Hinata, ^_^ hope to read more soon! SC |
| xxcherry-vixenxx 2008-08-30 ch 5, | abusecan't wait for the next chapter... it's soo exciting!! i wish the chapters were longer though but still it's good! xxcherry-vixenxx |
| chriss101 2008-06-27 ch 4, | abuseUpdate! I really like it. |
| animefan28 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuseNeji did act like quite a jerk in this one but i guess hes pretty **, who wouldn't be if they found out the almost died and lost their pride because the hokage was drunk!! lol I could see tsunade doing that at some point. ! :) good chapter, write more soon! |
| animefan28 2008-04-08 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter hm i wonder who... ill just read more. :) |
| animefan28 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseagain poor Neji! lol Hopefully he doesn't get too depressed. |
| animefan28 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseyes i defintely see why Neji would be mad at himself for surviving in that way; he seems the type to want to die honorably in battle and not clinging to life. he shouldn't be too hard oh himself though! good start |
| lily 2008-03-23 ch 3, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE! I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY, BUT THE CLIFFHANGER IS JUST TOURCHUR!(SORRY FOR THE MISSPELLING)UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! PLEASE! |
| .'Sabaku No Annie'. 2008-01-21 ch 3, | abuseI like this! please continue to update soon! =D |
| Jemiul 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abusea fantastic chapter. I love it. Keep up the great work. Jemiul |
| jackie 2007-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked it, i hope it develops into a great story! |