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Reviews For: Hell To Pay

fanpire ava
2008-09-03
ch 5,
abuseANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER I LOVED THIS ONE. UPDATE SOON POR FAVOR
fanpire ava
2008-09-03
ch 4,
abuseOME! THAT WAS SO SAD. I LOVE IT! PLEASE KEEP WRITING. IM EXCITED NOW
narutoluvin101
2008-09-01
ch 5,
abuse...dang...this is a really good story! ^-^...hope you update soon...onegai!
Shubaltz Crazist
2008-08-30
ch 5,
abusePoor Hinata, ^_^ hope to read more soon! SC
xxcherry-vixenxx
2008-08-30
ch 5,
abusecan't wait for the next chapter... it's soo exciting!! i wish the chapters were longer though but still it's good!

xxcherry-vixenxx
chriss101
2008-06-27
ch 4,
abuseUpdate! I really like it.
animefan28
2008-04-08
ch 4,
abuseNeji did act like quite a jerk in this one but i guess hes pretty **, who wouldn't be if they found out the almost died and lost their pride because the hokage was drunk!! lol I could see tsunade doing that at some point. ! :) good chapter, write more soon!
animefan28
2008-04-08
ch 3,
abuseGood chapter hm i wonder who... ill just read more. :)
animefan28
2008-04-08
ch 2,
abuseagain poor Neji! lol Hopefully he doesn't get too depressed.
animefan28
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseyes i defintely see why Neji would be mad at himself for surviving in that way; he seems the type to want to die honorably in battle and not clinging to life. he shouldn't be too hard oh himself though! good start
lily
2008-03-23
ch 3, anon.
abusePLEASE UPDATE! I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY, BUT THE CLIFFHANGER IS JUST TOURCHUR!(SORRY FOR THE MISSPELLING)UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! PLEASE!
.'Sabaku No Annie'.
2008-01-21
ch 3,
abuseI like this! please continue to update soon! =D
Jemiul
2007-12-09
ch 2,
abusea fantastic chapter. I love it.
Keep up the great work.

Jemiul
jackie
2007-11-28
ch 1, anon.
abusei liked it, i hope it develops into a great story!
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