 helen 2009-11-17 . chapter 4 COMPLETE!??!!
really how ??
i am speechless , this fic is amazing ,& this chap seemed like the begining ,not the END , plz update or write a sequel or sth but don't leave it there. |
 linda 2009-10-14 . chapter 4 wow wow & wow!!
how can u stop there?
really amazing , can't w8 to c wat will happen next
more please |
 MargotTenn 2009-03-26 . chapter 4This story is absolutely awesome! Are you going to continue it? The eerie, sad moment when Chris first saw Wyatt, when we knew what he was going to do but Chris didn't, was so chilling. But even as he was doing murder, I felt so sorry for Wyatt - so lost and alone without his brother. Great work! Please write more. |
 Haruka-Hime 2008-12-29 . chapter 4Well written. I look forward to the next chapter. |
 Scented Hairpin 2008-10-10 . chapter 4Love the idea that deadChris is sort of lost and confused - makes sense. Being dead would be a bit traumatizing. And the scene with Wyatt is SO intense - the fact that Wyatt can't go one, how far he's willing to go to get Chris back, Wyatt's issues with his parents. Is there more to this story? I can decide if I think the end is a cliff hanger or just a bleak finish. |
 kirallie 2008-08-18 . chapter 4Ouch! Don't know who I feel more sorry for, Chris being ripped backj into life or Wyatt for being in so much pain that he started down that path. Why was Chris destined to die at that age no matter what time period? |
 HikaruOfDreams 2008-05-11 . chapter 4This is so creative! amazing :D :D :D!
i cant wait to read more! |
 monica 2008-05-10 . chapter 4 wow loved it , & raising the dead will have way too much consequences , please update asap |
 SylvanSpirit 2008-05-10 . chapter 4oh
creepy...
but i still like the first one the most
it seemed...
i dunno
i liked it the most
this one is a tad bit too dark for my liking
but its still good
update soon! |
 Shivani123 2008-05-09 . chapter 4wow this is so good
plz plz plz update! |
 sarah 2008-05-09 . chapter 4 wow this story is really great , can't wait to see wat will happen next , plz update it soon |
 lizardmomma 2008-05-09 . chapter 4what was he thinking, bringing back the dead? |
 angeleyenc 2008-05-08 . chapter 4plz update! oh no! is wyatt evil again? |
 Egyptian Era 2008-05-08 . chapter 4wow,this is interesting. I remembered this story well and now it has chapter 4. I really like the story about the relationship of the two brothers. Keep it up |
 cdfe88 2008-01-19 . chapter 3Very, very nice. Very elegant writing, very creative response to the prompts, and very good plot idea. Excellent quality! |