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Timeless Eclipse
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
I loved how you portrayed the emotions and the characters in this story.

I also love the end First i thought she was giving birth then having sex then when I read the last part I laughed so hard I was like I think so dirty

I also love the end quotes this is so favourited!

KAWAI!
KazeMizuki
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Lol!
The ExT scene... was hilarious!
digi-gal-rox
2009-01-10 . chapter 1
that's such a sweet story. i loved it!
Sakura Petal Wings
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
...*silence*
TOMOYO'S CRAZY!
LOL.
Poor Sakura, the marriage was all a lie!
SxS 4eva!
White Blossoms
2008-06-04 . chapter 1
That was a different perspect in the kind of realationship that they could have! It was very well done! I really enjoyed it! Great one-shot! Good work! Very funny ending, I was sitting there thinking no way it would end with them doing something like that you know just waiting for it to be something like them opening or moving somtething around! But hm what then was Tomoyo taping? LOL! Great story!

White Blossoms
rosedreamer101
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
lol that last part was so funny... lol!
Elodie Wolfe
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
OMG I LOVED this story. Your writing is so good. I like the way you potrayed them. No one else I know does that. So it's good for some change. As long as they end up together.
More more more is what I demand of you lol. Update your other stories soon.
Love Saiba
Princess Annika
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
I loved it! great job!
x-Trisha-x
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
haha, i loved that.
romance, drama, and humor. :]
awesome job!
Cherry Akira Li
2007-12-24 . chapter 1
loved story but 1 questin wat was going on with moyo and eri?
MistyMagicWaterflower aka xImmortalxRomanticx
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
I wub it...SyaoranxSakura Forever~! T_T
xXanimeaddictXx
2007-12-06 . chapter 1
hey i really 100x like ur story it almost made me cry and the last part with tomoyo and eriol is so funny. please keep up the very good work!
cherry
2007-12-05 . chapter 1
If you're gonna write something like this again, go for it! I'll support you all the way. Just to be sure, but are you continuing your other two stories 'Tainted Love' and 'Cupid's Chokehold'? Will look forward to it, if you do! =)
lady raiah
2007-12-04 . chapter 1
aw... i loved it!! you did a very great job.. liked it! loved it!!
SparklingStar25
2007-12-02 . chapter 1
This was awesome!!
and your ending message is perfect!
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