 Tairi Soraryu 2008-02-17 . chapter 1Wow, your one-shots are really powerful. Great introspective shots of the characters, and just a bit sad that their life is so short and so dark. Thanks for a great read! |
 Rosa Heartlily 2007-12-03 . chapter 1Nice, thoughtful little piece. |
 saya 2007-11-29 . chapter 1 chapter is too short to give a proper review but I like the way you wrote about their short seed lives. |
 Mare-Mare 2007-11-28 . chapter 1very cool. i love the gentle silence along with the deep aprehension that comes when your life is for hire. for some reason i really like the small details of zell and of squall picking out the blonde strands only to leave the dark. most beautiful! |
 Netta Sloan 2007-11-28 . chapter 1Very nicely done. I love the quiet feeling with this. Zell joking about the SeeD short shelf life was sad, but in-character. |