Thanks for posting this story. You have a very interesting style. I liked a lot of your ruminations especially the one about silence and friendship. You did keep me on my "toes" by switching from Hutch's POV to Starsk's POV without warning. Not sure there is a better way to delineate this.

Thanks again for posting.

Lynn

Great story - I thought I was the only one who noticed they were always going the wrong way when they got a call!

hey there.. I remember some of this story but not the whole thing..so i reread it and i loved the talking between the two..

This is EXCELLENT in every way. A genuine cop story and a genuine story about two cops. Some massively funny one-liners and your style definitely refreshing. One of the highlights of my reading year. I certainly hope someone can convince you to write more and don't worry about a beta. It would be a shame to lose that spontaneity. Enjoyed it HEAPS. A big thank you. J

That was great! I so hope you intend to write more real soon, because I loved this. Your characterizations are on spot (I loved it that Hutch so doesn't understand what women see in Starsk. Very... male-ish, I thought. And he so would be like that! Great writing style.) your plot ideas were neat and I def liked the h/c. Oh, and my fave line had to be:

He wondered what could be in Hutch's mind every time something like this happened, because he would always flinch.

So much in just one line - great! Hope your moving your magic fingers right now, for I'm ready for more of your work. *nod, nod*

This was an enjoyable story. You have a refreshing way of writing that's probably due to English not being your native language. I totally enjoyed your vision of Starsky and Hutch and their world. Thanks so much for sharing your talent and hope this is only the beginning of what we have to look forward to.

Becky

hey there...what a great story..i love the part where hutch was set up with the cab driver...very funny..there were alot of really cute one liners...hope you write more