In your summary you should include PWP (Plot?What Plot?) As that is exactly what this eight line poem is. Not bolding it would also be nice, but is in no way required.

WHOA! I love this. Powerful stuff. I like it because of the end "you spineless whelp!" Lol great stuff.

You sound like you really like Naruto :)

Hey I was wondering if you wanted to reveiw and read my story Lily's Stalker. It's about a strong and passiante girl with issues who is in love with Rock Lee. Things start to take a turn for the worst though. Read if you want... if you do read please reveiw!

clap clap its good

may there souls be eaten by the great shinigami, and may there skin feal the pain of the foxes heralds

It would've helped if it had a plot, not just lyrics to a song, but I think I kind of understand why you did this. Actually, it makes sense. - But what happened to poor Naruto? I don't want him to get hurt! XD Darn, first something happens in Yu-Gi-Oh GX, now Naruto...