I love it! 3 It's so sad though. It makes the perfect song for their relationship. I may want to quote it one day, is that ok? It's just such a strong image, y'know?

This is good! Poor Ichigo! His hollow wants to see him break! He called Ichigo pretty, eventhough he was glass! :)

of course I liked !

Basically, Ichigo wants to know why Hichigo can't love him and why his Hollow wants to hurt him so much, right? Well, that's what I figured...

It's a good little piece of work, that's for certain. It addresses an author's original thoughts and, sometimes, that's all you need to make a good story/one-shot. XD

that was F-ing awesome! SWEET!

confuzzled... but that's ok. i liked it anyway. good work.

I really liked this it was very interesting, and well i don't know how to but it but i definitely liked it.

I LOVE IT!

It's just... like... oh... uh... I dunno...

JUST LOVE IT!

KK

MORRBID! But in a good way. Mind tripping goodness in a morbid way is a great way to start your day! Don't mind me, I'm just hyped up on SI's review count. Great oneshot!