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| FireChildSlytherin5 2008-03-03 ch 1,  | abuseI will agree Beta. :) Love the one-shot. I think its cute that the Hippo and the Boulder being "freinds" with Toph. |
| Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseAww that was cute and original. Good job! :D |
| Honors 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abusefor you to have writen this in history class its pretty good. hope you can start another story thats even better than this. keep up the good work and good luck. |
| WhiteFlame-XIII 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI alrady watched Black sun, so will you do a favor and review my Black sun story? This is an okay story so far, but where are you going with this? It's just a setting introduction so far. The grammar is fairly steady. You have the character vocal patterns down well, too. Not bad |