 Horseangel101 2009-09-09 . chapter 2please continue! its a great story so far! |
 alicecullenhaleluvsjasper 2009-05-20 . chapter 2this story is gd, update soon...alice xx |
 KristenStewartFan 2009-01-09 . chapter 2I like it, please update soon |
 TheDay'sEye 2009-01-07 . chapter 2Hey can't wait for an update.
It would be great to see Edward get mad at Mike if he hit on Bella - even though he ig going after Angela - i'm sorry i'm ramberling.
Great story |
 HopelessRomantic 2008-12-07 . chapter 2 I really can't wait to find out what's happening in Edward and (shudder) Mike's mind. Update soon. It's actually getting pretty good. |
 music-freakgirl14 2008-12-05 . chapter 2oh write more about him falling in love with her |
 sarahtwilightlover 2008-09-24 . chapter 2interesting/...
i tink u have a REALLY good plot...
defo continue it!
is rosalie and emmett cumin in2 dis?
rite more...
r else...
its ...
WAR!
mwahahahaha!
-randomness queen- :-) |
 Asailn 2008-07-27 . chapter 2WRITE MORE! this story kinda reminds me of john tucker must die :P |
 JemmaWNN 2008-07-12 . chapter 2PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
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I love the story |
 Ha-LoCo 2008-06-29 . chapter 2i thought this was really cool. plz update soon, i like the idea of edward liking bella when he's not suppose too- its kinda awesome |
 xoxErinxx 2008-06-27 . chapter 1 OMG i love this story. You really have to update soon. i cannot wait to see what happens. i think that it would be a little bit better if you had it either from Bella's or Edwards point of view. dont get me wrong i like it withe third person view to but i think that it would be more interseting from first person. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 dare2beDAZZLED 2008-06-18 . chapter 2i really liked it but it might be better from the character's point of view. just a suggestion. keep up the good work. |
 Luckygrl27 2008-06-11 . chapter 2Awesome! I love your story and i hope you update soon! i love the twist that you're planning to put into the story, please continue! |
 Anemies 2008-06-04 . chapter 1a bit too straight for my taste but I do have to say you have a wonderful summary. I really did love it. but I'm not reading further though, sorry. I was really nice.
a Reputation ruined? in exchange for love? ha! as if that's worth it. |
 Edwards little sister 2008-05-20 . chapter 2this sounds good - good job! |