“You two sleep in one room, Sasuke can take the couch.”

“Why am I on the couch, dobe?”

“Because the ** get the couch!”


LOL OH MY GOSH. that was so funny! it sounds like a bad marriage. xD

WHOAH. I love how you're explaining this-is it like-like air bending? Is that what you're trying to say?

Aw! Poor Ayame! But isn't Ayame the same name of the ramen waitress girl? Well anyway this is surely interesting.

Aww! This was so sweet! Really nice read, good job!

Well, I just re-read this again and I have to say it is one of the best I've read.
I just love it so much :) lol.
This is the only OC story I've ever really liked.
No one can seem to make the characters believable, but you did that and beyond.
You're seriously an amazing author :D

omg. you are such a talented buttercup! this was amazing! yay! omg, my Queen, I can't even believe this was your FIRST chappy story! you are brilliant! truly brilliant! ah, the cuteness, the SasuNaru, ah, it was beautiful. I love this friggin story! You amazing buttercup! ah, I love you!

aw.whiskers. that was unbelievably cute. I feel all warm inside. ooh, my Queen, you talented buttercup you, I love this!

down with Raizou~! yay. LOVED the Sasunaru yummyness! hehehe. ohh, ayame kicked some **. woot.Ah, I love you my Queen!

hey, it was good, loved every word of it. hehehehe. ooh. Very nice. man, I can't tell you how much I'm in love with this story. it's so good! ugh, unfortunately, I've gotta go and sleep before I pass out, but I'll be back to read more, my Queen! Ah, you talented buttercup you.

-MUCHO love!

ooh, you're brilliant. I adore this story. so much, my Queen!

I am enjoying it, make no doubt about that. I need more! I'm off!

wah! this just made me cry like a baby! but, it was good. imma off to read more! *sniff* (again)

WHAT?! OMG! GAH! oh. my. I'm too shocked, my Queen...I'mma gonna go and read the next chapter...*sniff*

wow. intense fight scene, and fluff all in one. MAN, I am LOVING THIS! YAY! I love you, my Queen. you talented buttercup you. oh, thank you for being born.

mah, I didn't even have to squint. hehe. yay for sasunaru. and yay for this story. I really love it. Honestly, it's progressing nicely, and wow. I wanna read more! Off to the next chapter!