|Reviews for Sora Claus: The Movie|
| Darth Ben Valor 12/10/07 . chapter 11
Whoo-hoo! Danny got adopted by Sora and Ariel, and Snoopy came back to the North Pole! _
Plus, Farquuad definitely got what he deserved! XD
Awesome work, JusSonic! Happy Holidays, and good luck with The Great Duck Detective! ;)
| Cylon One 12/10/07 . chapter 11
That was great.
| Neros Urameshi 12/10/07 . chapter 11
Hooray! Farquaad is sent to his doom in space! I love it!
Great fic, JusSonic, and Merry Christmas!
| Shabon Flurry 12/10/07 . chapter 11
I'll also make a GMD parody, only it has Aiko from Ojamajo Doremi as Basil and Wuya from Xiaolin Showdown as Ratigan. I can't wait for yours!
| Phillip Clark 12/10/07 . chapter 11
Great story Jussonic. And an early Christmas present to you and the other authors: I've finally got an account in here! I can't wait to finally start writing, especially as I've got the casts for about thirty-something parodies set up.
| Fortune Glyph 12/10/07 . chapter 11
Yahoo! They saved Christmas! Cant wait for the next story! Merry Christmas!
| Wormtail96 12/9/07 . chapter 11
Well, it is good to hear they stopped the exploding candy canes, so that was a relief. And Farquad ended up in space! LOL!
A Great Mouse Detective parody? Not thar is a great idea. I shall indeed be looking foward to it.
Once again, well done, and Merry Christmas!
| Anonymous But Interested 12/9/07 . chapter 11
Hey there. Thanks for getting this concluding chapter up. Great job on the end action, drama and exchanges. Anyway, a "Great Mouse Detective" parody is coming up next? WOW! I'm DEFINITELY going to be looking forward to THAT. I'm definitely curious as to who are going to be cast as Toby (the bloodhound Basil employs that, ironically, Oliva seemed to have an easier time getting to cooperate [though, given Lilo is going to be Oliva, I already have a pretty good hunch about that, it's still just a hunch]), Felicia (Ratigan's pet cat/chief enforcer), Mister Flaversham and the Queen.
Anyway, I already have a few suggestions for this one, if you don't mind (if you do, I profusely apologize in advance):
When Daffy is officially introduced to the story, maybe he could make a comment like "I just hope that THIS story will allow me to be shown as more competent than I appeared the LAST TIME I parodied Sherlock Holmes." (referencing, of course, the 1950s Looney Tunes cartoon "Deduce You Say", where Daffy and Porky parodied Sherlock Holmes and Doctor Watson respectively and, of course, referencing the fact that Basil and Dawson themselves; whom Daffy and Porky are being assigned the roles of; are parodies of Sherlock Holmes and Doctor Watson).
The death trap that Judge Doom sticks Daffy and Porky in when it gets close to the climax could include the trap that the two are tied to being over a trap door leading to a pit full of concentrated "dip" (aka "Splash"), since Judge Doom would know full well that Daffy and Porky, being classic style toons, could easily survive the "Snap, Boom, Tang, Thunk, Splat" portions, even if it WOULD put them in A LOT of dizzying pain (Judge Doom could put in "I know full well about how durable you are from hard experience, Daffy, so I know the mousetrap, gun, arrow, axe and anvil ALONE won't finish you. However, the pliminaries are merely to make sure you and your plump associate are too dazed to save yourselves from my Dip when the anvil landing springs open the trap door the two of you are over.")
At the point when Daffy is getting ready to chase Judge Doom through the air and is calling Porky and whoever you cast as Mister Flaversham to him, Porky could suggest, "Why don't you just spin change into Duck Dodgers and use your jet pack to chase him THAT way?". Daffy could then admit, "Hey, the jet pack is too unreliable. I can't risk it blowing up on me when I need it the most." Then Porky could ask "Well, why don't you spin change into Stupor Duck? You'd have the same flying ability without having to worry about the jet pack blowing up on you, PLUS you'd have super-strength AND super-speed to help you in the final showdown with Judge Doom." At that point, Daffy could comment "Well, for one thing, it would not make the end battle anywhere near as thrilling to the readers, especially since they would know I could fly to safety easily when they get to that point of the climax if I spin-changed into THAT identity."
Well, that's, again, assuming you like the ideas enough to use them when the time comes. If not, I profusely apologize in advance and still look forward to the story. :-D
| acosta perez jose ramiro 12/9/07 . chapter 11
Nice ending, and thanks for using my suggestion, as always.
The Great Mouse Detective... I love that movie!
Keep the good writing.
| Darth Ben Valor 12/9/07 . chapter 10
Holy crap! Danny and Snoopy know nothing of the candy cane's most fatal flaw, and yet they're gonna deliver them, anyway! O_O
Sora: Aww, man! If only they knew!
June: I just hope we can catch up to them before it's too late!
All three: Please continue!
| Fortune Glyph 12/9/07 . chapter 10
The chase is on! Great chapter! Update soon!
| Wormtail96 12/9/07 . chapter 10
Well, June and Sora better hurry to stop that sleigh of explosive candy canes! And I hope Farquad gets what is coming to him!
Update when you can!
| acosta perez jose ramiro 12/8/07 . chapter 10
Hey, very good one!
Got this last suggestion for next chapter. It's after the whole problem is solved and kids go back to like Santa/Sora.
- "Too bad we no longer have those flying candies; I wanted to use them as fuel for a new plane I'm making out of a mailbox and a doghouse." Numbuh 2 comments Chuckie, both boys holding their Christmas presents. "At least Santa gave me the new parachute and safety goggles I needed."
"And I got the gift I asked for Angelica." Chuckie tells. "It's a little batch of Cynthia dolls' newest models and accesories; since Santa never gives me coal and always bring me the whole list, Angelica will complete her collection without getting coal as well."
"You're too good with that girl." Numbuh 2 shakes his head. "I know she's pretty but she's also as dangerous as a bomb. I'm sure she would never ask for a present for you."
"I don't mind; I love her the way she is." Chuckie replies, and, at that moment, Angelica appears in front of the boys, her hands behind her back.
"Nice to hear that, Finster, because I feel the same way about you." Angelica then shows Chuckie a present box. "First year I didn't get any coal."
Chuckie beams and gives Angelica her gift while receiving his, Numbuh 2 getting a surprised expression. Angelica smiles when opening her present, and Chuckie does the same when finding his gift is a new set of glasses with a note reading 'So you can see how much I love you' attached to it. The boy and girl smile at each other and then start kissing, the KND getting a thoughtful face.
"I wonder if next year I should ask for a present for Cree."
Keep the good writing.
| Anonymous But Interested 12/8/07 . chapter 10
Thanks for getting this next chapter up AND for liking my last two suggestions enough to use them (even though I got details on one of them wrong; I AM sorry about that). BOTH are immensely appreciated. Anyway, great job, as usual on the exchanges and scene set-up. I'm definitely looking forward to the last chapter (as well as finding out the next story you're going to be tackling) as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
| Neros Urameshi 12/8/07 . chapter 10
The sleigh loaded with explosive candy canes? What a predicament! Hurry, Sora and June! You gotta stop the sleigh before it's too late!