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| Dawn Ruichen 2007-12-05 ch 1,  | abuseA very sweet little story. I like. |
| Eriea 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful indeed. Very Beautiful. I love the pace, the setting, the ambiance, the flow of the words... all of them are breathtaking. You managed to convey Kirihara Akaya with such simple words. I can see in my mind's eye that this is truly something that Kirihara would do, because when he set his mind into it, he won't give up. It's wonderful. Thank you for sharing it :) |
| Animegoil 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseSo cute. So sweet, and powerful and moving. You captured the child in Kirihara wonderfully, a very sweet child with some temper issues, but with an inextinguishable will. It was lovely-- I loved the reality you set in also: How he wasn't able to finish but a fraction of the cranes by the first surgery, and even at the second one still had 200 left, how Yukimura relapses. Wonderfully done in emotion and general feeling. |
| sabriel-chan 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely...I normally don't like Kirihara too much, but this was beautiful. |
| blissified 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseNot a fan of kirihara but loves this to bits. |
| Kitsune no Yuuki 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseYou're making my heartbreak writing them like this. Heartbreak in a good way. |