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Reviews for: Gundam SEED: Moon Chapter
kasmo
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
Very nice. It's nice to see such a light hearted story, when Athrun and Kira can be friends, when they still haven't been torn apart by the war.
LadyNightSky
2008-09-28 . chapter 3
Such a great story! I love how Athrun and Kira are characterized, and how they go through their childhood teaching each other. It's easy to see how deep their bond is in this story, and I especially loved this chapter. So many palpable emotions are present, and even at such a young age, you can see the foundations of the people they will be in the future [: Very well written, thoughtful, creative, and overall amazing. I hope you update soon with new anecdotes about the boys' childhood!! Excellent story.

:)Bee

P.S. Is Alex the inspiration for Athrun's alias later on? Maybe Alex Dino is a tribute to his old friend...
Metallic Ghost
2008-07-27 . chapter 3
This story is so cute! Athrun and Kira as younger kids never fails to make me smile...
Melicress
2008-01-21 . chapter 3
OMG! *giggles* They're so cute ^_^
Aw... I love how Kira is all heart and feeling and Athrun is all calm and logic. It's a nice balance, and really adds feeling to this ficy! Soo adorable! Fwee! :D
*hugs liddle Kira and Athrun*
Meany Patrick Zala! :( Poor Athrun! *kisses Athrun's ankle all better*
tee hee, I LOVED it!
nee hee hee :D
Melicress
Revolution A
2008-01-05 . chapter 3
Good job! Do continue! >_< This is far by one of the best stories in By the way, will you be writing stuff about Athrun and Kira after the war?
Revolution A
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
That was so cute and in character! I don't prefer OCs but you've did a great job! I even like Alex Jordi too! -hugs you- I think you should enable people without an account to review too, so you'll get more reviews... Thank you! Everyone was so in character! Cute lil' Kira and a dependable Athrun! :)
Lal Mirch
2007-12-30 . chapter 3
Great story! It's clearly shows Athrun and Kira's relationship as best friends that the series never really showed and it's adorably cute too!
Infinite sky
2007-12-03 . chapter 3
hey!! I LOVED THIS STORY!
So funny and...REAL!!
Your English is SUPER! ( just great!)

...yeah that was it I guess...
I can't wait till you post your other stories here too!!

Nice story! :3
simply -v-
2007-12-02 . chapter 1
hmm i dont really get that child kira n athrun feeling, but it was kinda cute i guess.

well written, better than the recent fics posted these days, which lack the gramma, sentence structure, chara development, story format, punctuation and the length.

you have all that :)

however, this type of fic may not be my thing as i do not feel much for it.
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