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oldsoul1964
2009-12-02 . chapter 12
About time!
QuietLion
2009-11-19 . chapter 25
Loved this fic!

So good!

Are you gonna write a sequal?

OR

Continue it with a grown up James becoming a Veela and finding his mate?

Anyways Love this fic, gonna go checko ut your other stuff now :D
singsparky
2009-11-09 . chapter 7
PLEASE fix this. I know it's already written but I can't stand the thought of Draco having another's baby. I almost got sick reading it. OK, calming down. On to chapter 8...
gaarapanda5
2009-11-09 . chapter 8
good story :)
i really hate Harry's personality in this though (and ron's)...they both have no empathy or sensitivity...but you write them well :)
Harry Snape-Potter
2009-11-06 . chapter 7
I am 100% against abortion but even i couldn't have my rapist child. I would sooner die then have that kind of reminder. I know I would just end up hating/resenting said child. It doesn't matter if its free of all crimes just the reminder of it is maddening. That might make me a bitch, but I couldn't do it. I would go against all religious beliefs that I have and hold dear if that meant not having another men's child that wasn't my husbands.
Deborah Katz
2009-11-05 . chapter 25
I liked this story, but did Harry ever get his magic
Paleness is a Virtue
2009-10-28 . chapter 15
omg omg omg i love this! im completely awestruck. all hail u! ah u r amazing and i loved the lemon!
my-tilly
2009-10-12 . chapter 25
I loved it. Few people can pull of a good veela story and you did just that. :)
MercuryAshlingPrincess
2009-10-11 . chapter 25
(Applauds)

I know it's been some time since you finished your creation, but I just felt the need to review it anyways. It took me roughly two days to read every word that you wrote, and between that time I only got a few hours of sleep (which was worth it in the end of course!).

I must say that you are a brilliant writer and I look forward to reading more of your work. This was, hands down, one of the best stories I have ever read on fanfiction. Your way with words kept me captivated the entire time.

Congradualtions on the amount of reviews, and good luck with your studies.

Much Love

MercuryAshlingPrincess
yanagikaworu
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
LOVE it!
KyuRyu
2009-09-20 . chapter 15
I must admit, if that was the first...lime...you've ever wrote, you are very good at it -.^
well, it's 2AM right now, so I'm going to sleep and reading the rest tomorrow(hopefully). ^_^
KyuRyu
2009-09-20 . chapter 9
I must say that I think you just made the castle my favorite Harry Potter character, and it's not even TECHNICALLY cannon...o.0 lolz. Can't wait to finish the story ^_^
KyuRyu
2009-09-20 . chapter 3
I just recently found our story, it's GREAT. I have to say it's one of the best-written Veela stories I've ever read.

Also, I wanted to point out a small mistake you made. In the part after the Trill, with Draco and the other male couple (Corydon and Ayden) you mixed the to males up, you started with Corydon being the Carrier by the looks of things and ended with him being the dominate--just thought I would let you know ^_^
Ithindiniel
2009-09-17 . chapter 25
I have no idea why I haven't found this AMAZING story earlier!
I loved it. Everything of it, especially that you took your time developing charakters and relationship as well as the fight against Voldemort.
Definitely goes onto my Favorite list!
I'm honoured to write review no. 1501 and am now off to read your other writings and put you on Author Alert.

Thank you very much for this story!
hpgirl4ever
2009-09-15 . chapter 25
I Loved it! It was very angsty at times and the eight year thing was kinda depressing, as was a few other things. . . but I think you did an Amazing job. I had never thought I'd like a creature fic but you got me addicted to this, so now I like veela Draco, and Harry as his mate. it's just awesome! Especially sence Harry/Draco is my favorite paring. Sorry if this is kind of long but brilliant and wonderful job! =D
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