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| momiji-k 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseHm, that one confused me a bit. o_O I think I understand... but I am not complely sure. |
| momiji-k 2008-04-29 ch 2, | abuseAh, *sigh* I can totally relate to that. I LIKE that man too... no matter what he IS or IS NOT wearing! ^_- That was really witty! Keep up the good work! |
| momiji-k 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseWow!! I really liked that!! I am going to read another! :) |
| MoonStarDutchess 2008-04-28 ch 3, | abuseThese were very good. I enjoyed them but I thought the writing in "Third Person" was very good. It was so few words yet so incredibly striking. |
| winglessfairy25 2008-04-28 ch 3, | abuse"Melt" was a beautifully written piece. I love it, truly. "Uniforms" is very amusing. Well, for me. Still, ROYAI! This chapter is a bit more serious. About how a homunculus like Lust learned to love. Great work with all the ficlets! Rin~ |
| words without 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseWho! Love the last line. Love the fact that Ross is in this. Love how this is going to be a collection now. Love that I got you writing Royai. And hey, M3gan-- ... That's all. |
| words without 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. I just realized I never fav'd this. And I totally meant to fav it. And even though I pretty much watched you write it (yay for being semi-roommates) I feel the need to re-mention your awesomeness. I mean, you're a girl who claims to not do romance so well, and you've never written Roy/Riza before, and all you've had to go on for these two utterly-complex characters is the manga and my inane, unhealthy, frothing-at-the-mouth obsession with 'em...and yet this puts a hell of a lot of the Royai fanfiction up here to shame. *virtually-shakes your hand* Also, it's currently 2 in the morning and I'm terribly un-tired. Joy. |
| MithLuin 2007-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseNicely done! I like this. It is true that their relationship is more involved than it appears on the surface. |
| Rissa......2 lazy 2 login 2007-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww!! So cute, I love it!! |
| Val-Creative 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseRoyai! ^^ Yay! Lovely work for your first try on the pairing! ~ Val |
| Ruingaraf 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it, since Hawkeye definatly has two sides. |
| DarkWhiteRose 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseNice! |
| winglessfairy25 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseGood work, really. I like the figurative language used and the style of writing. Keep it up! Erinn~ |