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momiji-k
2008-04-29
ch 3,
abuseHm, that one confused me a bit. o_O I think I understand... but I am not complely sure.
momiji-k
2008-04-29
ch 2,
abuseAh, *sigh* I can totally relate to that. I LIKE that man too... no matter what he IS or IS NOT wearing! ^_-

That was really witty! Keep up the good work!
momiji-k
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseWow!! I really liked that!! I am going to read another! :)
MoonStarDutchess
2008-04-28
ch 3,
abuseThese were very good. I enjoyed them but I thought the writing in "Third Person" was very good. It was so few words yet so incredibly striking.
winglessfairy25
2008-04-28
ch 3,
abuse"Melt" was a beautifully written piece. I love it, truly.
"Uniforms" is very amusing. Well, for me. Still, ROYAI!
This chapter is a bit more serious. About how a homunculus like Lust learned to love. Great work with all the ficlets!

Rin~
words without
2008-04-27
ch 2,
abuseWho!

Love the last line. Love the fact that Ross is in this. Love how this is going to be a collection now. Love that I got you writing Royai.

And hey, M3gan--

...

That's all.
words without
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseWhoa. I just realized I never fav'd this. And I totally meant to fav it. And even though I pretty much watched you write it (yay for being semi-roommates) I feel the need to re-mention your awesomeness. I mean, you're a girl who claims to not do romance so well, and you've never written Roy/Riza before, and all you've had to go on for these two utterly-complex characters is the manga and my inane, unhealthy, frothing-at-the-mouth obsession with 'em...and yet this puts a hell of a lot of the Royai fanfiction up here to shame. *virtually-shakes your hand*

Also, it's currently 2 in the morning and I'm terribly un-tired. Joy.
MithLuin
2007-12-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseNicely done! I like this. It is true that their relationship is more involved than it appears on the surface.
Rissa......2 lazy 2 login
2007-12-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww!! So cute, I love it!!
Val-Creative
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseRoyai! ^^ Yay! Lovely work for your first try on the pairing!

~ Val
Ruingaraf
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseI really liked it, since Hawkeye definatly has two sides.
DarkWhiteRose
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abuseNice!
winglessfairy25
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abuseGood work, really. I like the figurative language used and the style of writing. Keep it up!

Erinn~
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