That was sad. Very nicely written, but sad. Which I suppose is the whole point of deathfic. Good job. Keep writing.

can u tell me where to find ways to die challnge?

I.HATE.YOU.
okay, I don't,
BUT I HATE SAD ENDINGS!
even if they're good sad endings, I HATE them!
...okay, so I loved your story...*mumbles under breath* but that does NOT MEAN I have to LIKE it!
It's a love/hate relationship, what can I say?

NO JOHN! Look! I've got Carson! *Throws doctor into story*

So sad! Cryed to this. Please do more!

Very sad history, I'm sorry but I don´t like reading about John´s death...I don´t like the genre, but is a good history. Congratulations.