A pretty good Marauder fic in my opinion.

i really liked this. i never thought about how they made the map!

very creative

definitly the kinda story i luv :-)

clear stoyline and nice ecorations

very matching language

one of my favs ;)

Wonderful little fic. I love reading about these characters when they were in school. Your dialogue is very natural, and everyone is perfectly in character.

Nice

very cute story, I enjoyed the Maruaders in this

-DL

That was great! When Peter mentioned going to the kitchen, I right away thought of Ron. I liked that Lily was the first to see the map. Great work!

Awesome!

I love that map!

I wish I had one!

wow, great story, really funny. clever take on the creation of the map.

"Then what are we waiting for?" Sirius asked, jumping up. "To the library," he proclaimed dramatically before taking off at full speed.

"If only he approached his school work with half so much excitement," Remus mock lamented.

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Absolutely loved that line ... hmm, if only mischievous people WOULD put their time into things like homework ... can't let my friend hear me say that ... oops. I really liked this story, Lily seems very key on (thought with recent info you didn't have at the time, this would be AU), Sirius is whimsical, and Peter still has a part as a fair Marauder, something that isn't done very often. All-in-all, I'd have to say that this was a very nice read and I enjoyed this very much.

I think this was quite bad. They all seemed to hate each other a bit, lupin was mean to peter, which seemed out of character. It didnt have alot of fun to it. It seemed too simple, like they want to make a map, they made a map. Big deal.

THIS WAS AMAZNG!

LOVED IT!

UR ANA AMAZING WRITER!

XANT WAIR FOR MORE OF UR STORIES!

Love,

Ale

nice story of how the MM came to be...great story.

That was fantastic. I like how you take real things that happen and turn them into your art. I really think it could happen like that. All of your stories I have read, potray the Marauders and Lily so well, I'm impressed. I hop you can allways tell when I review.

Sincerely,

wishing Stranger.

How... Marauder-ish. Excellent job.

Love,

*Bridget*