Wow good story indeed, you really have an abillity at writting. And for the trio personallity i chose a) because it is interesting to see their point of view as an evil arancar

I think their personalities should be A)the same as before, its pretty cool. And I really like the original story. I also think their point of view on vizards are really cool. I also really like the idea of restoring nel to her original form, she's really cool. But I also think grimmjow has the ability to become a really cool character. I also think you should make a privarion espada like thats like zaraki kenpachi.

This is a great twist on the story I must say. Sure, it had a few flaws but what story dosn't anymore. I realy injoyed reading it, but I think it would have probley bean beter if you put a few more detales in the fights, and a couple of puns here or there, but that's just me. Truthfully, I can't wait to read the remake, but I'd say D would be my prefered. This was a great story and I hope you make more.

i think u should go with c it would be nice to see how things go for them

The "idea" is just a universally good idea I think. I had a simular idea using Ichigo's sisters, Ururu and Jinta... but it was just an idea in the end.
I like your story so far, although you could really use a beta reader. But you probably know that already.

Well I just read everything in one sitting and its 1 AM where I am. I really like this idea and honestly believe you didn't have to rewrite it, but your the author. Anyway, as for your question here, I personally liked how you depicted them in this story so I suggest sticking to that.

I looked at this then the rewrite and i prefer the rewrite.
Still looks to me like a good fic

P.s. 100th review YAY! :D

Personally, I thought that you were doing fairly well, other than a few grammatical errors. Honestly, if you start over with it, then you should keep up with A, but possibly throw in some more hints that they can be changed with Inoue's abilities.

would just like to comment that tessai was catain of the kido corps, a specialized division outside the Gotei 13 similar to the secret mobile corps.

Although your rewriting this I definately was enjoying this one :) I was hoping to see this one continue but anyway looking foward to the rewrite XD!

hey would u mind e-mailing my review to my e-mail plz??
and by the way i think your story's awesome and that tenten shouldn't have soifon's blade but neji should have it because it would go with eight trigams 64 palms. above all, he should not have byakuya's blade cause it doesnt really make sense. and i think someone else should have aizen's blade but the story's dead anyway. Also, I came in too late for the vote but Tatsuki should be a vizard in new life same world. i know im all over the place but hollowfication is mad awesome. by the way, ye si am a kid. (compared to u). i am 14.

Hey, It's that kid with the Naruto Next-Gen story. As for in the end of Chapter 9 of Hollowfication, no Tessai was not Urahara's lieutenant,Hiyori was. And I think that only Ururu is an experiment and not Jinta cause Jinta seems to have no powers whatsoever. Just a giant club-like weapon that seems to suck big time.

More review in the future,

-Takuya Uzumaki-

PS:I'm also thinking of a Naruto Next-Gen/Bleach crossover where seven of us get zanpakutos. Here's the idea so far-

Takuya Uzumaki-
Release Command:Blaze,Fenikkusu (Phoenix)
Ability: Shoots reiatsu (hope I spelled that right)of of blade which is an extension of the blade's consciousness. Can move around of its own free will.

Kyo Mibu-
Release Command: Alchemize,Sabishii Buke (lonely warrior)
Ability: To Be Announced (Still thinkin bout it. Mostly cause Kyo was my friend's character so it's kinda hard makin up abilities)

Namikaze Hatake-
Release Command: Paralyze,Hogosha (Guardian)
Ability: Similar to Kurotsuchi's. Uses electricity to electrify nerve tendons and paralze muscles.Close range weapon.

Mikhail of the Sand-
Relase Command: Blow em Away,Tatsujin Suna (Master Sand)
Ability: Projects Mikhail's reiatsu in a field around him allowing him to control the sand his sword turns into as well as the sand he carries around with him all the time.

Lee Jr.
Release Command: Noble Blood and Born Prodigies shal succumb to true talents of a warrior. Show them the power of hard work and determination, Shinko Buki (True Weapon)
Ability: Though it's first appearance is a staff, this shikkai has many transformations. hope you dont think I'm copying off that guy from a new life, same world. if you do ill change the shikkai to something else

ill tell you the other 2 another time. if you put a message asking me 2 when you update this or a new life, same world then ill tell you the bankais and a prolouge to one of the stories.

Hey, love this story. I like the idea of badass!Keigo, badass!Mizuiro, and more-badass!Tatsuki, and you've made them into Arrancars in a believable way, for a believable reason, and still kept what I see as their most basic qualities, twisted (as they should be) by their collective transformation.

Unfortunately, I will be stopping here, at least for now, as this is as far as I've gotten into the series and I don't want to spoil it by going further into your story. But I love it so far. One of my favorite things is Keigo bonding with Wonderwice. I can so see that, and it makes me giggle every time they're 'on screen' together.

On thing that I believe is important, though, is your grammar. I think you should go back over your chapters carefully, or else snatch up a beta to do so, as you've got a lot of typos that would easily be solved by another pair of eyes. Otherwise, this is really good and I look forward to being able to finish reading it.

(Though I'm disappointed I won't see Keigo and Uryu face off. And am happy you decided to give Tatsuki a Fraccion. And hope Keigo gets a higher Espada seat than nine. And am giddy you settled on Senbonzakura as the Zanpakuto for Neji. I'll have to go read that story.)

-TS

just wanting to know, how did they know about the mask?

Go with D. that sounds like the best way to go.