It took me a while to get the story's format, but now that I do, I find it very intriguing. Extra kudos for pairing Demyx with a non-Organization member. And I'm loving the endless metaphors. There are even a few I can't really decipher (which is very rare).

Ohmai. Saix/Demyx that contains neither a hyper-ass Demyx or mentions of puppy!Saix? You have my attention.

... I seriously love you forever...

These are absolutely beautiful.