Damn. Good story but... sniffle... Damn.

Drama huh?

then a nicely done one i must say. a tactician's last thoughts...

slightly dark in a way, and i like that.

Hmm...

Kind of wondering how sitting in his own filth would make him have a random epiphany about how fighting was stupid... The conditions described above flowed well in terms of ideas, but there is a big gap between his empty stomach and "fighting was necessary..." that I felt needed to be filled in more... Maybe put in a thought or two about how is own condition was caused by fighting never "solving or fixing anything."

Oh, okay. There it is. I was reviewing this as I read it, and now I see the connections better. But it was still kind of empty when I was reading it.

I don't know what to say now. This is a bad review because I'm sleepy and my head is about to explode. XD

Too bad this only has one other review. :/

Nice work!

It's sad, but true.