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| wolf_firez 2008-05-08 ch 17, anon. | abuseSad story and nice way to end it -_-... but it was very thought out. Great avalon story! |
| Death angel chick211 2008-04-21 ch 20,  | abuseUm...how dramatic it kinda reminds me of my old life...Nice chap. |
| Draelya 2008-04-19 ch 20, | abuseGreat ending. I loved it. I thought Adrienne was gonna die, though...*morbid thoughts* The ZachxAdrienne pairing really sweet. Great job! Ja ne! |
| WolfAngelKari 2008-04-18 ch 20, | abuseomg that was osm!! i look forward for more stories about Avalon from u. ur one of my favorite authors! |
| Snowlia 2008-04-17 ch 20, | abuseAMAZING story, I absolutly loved it. I'm glad Adriane finally got help at the end and that you didn't end with her death, that would have been a let down. I have to admit I didn't like the way it cut off so abrubtly (sp?) but it ends when it has to I supose. This was the onyl song from all of them that I knew, that makes me feel a little sad, haha. But it is a great song. The entire story was great and I can't wait for your one-shot! ~Snowlia |
| Death angel chick211 2008-04-09 ch 19, | abuseNice chap.Oh man now Dreamer knows that isn't good.(I'm not telling you why`cause it's personal sorry).Anyway please write more.Talk to ya next time I review.(or if ya reply which most people do). -Twirling Zakura |
| WolfAngelKari 2008-04-07 ch 19, | abuseomg i luved it, and wen dreamer screamed pack-mate, LMAO i imagined him screaming it rlly weird. it was so funny :D anyways, great job, plz make some more!! |
| Silent Moon 14 2008-04-07 ch 19, | abuseOMG! write more! I love Evanescence (especially that song) |
| Snowlia 2008-04-06 ch 19, | abuseOh no! I hope she doesn't kill herself! That would be...well in my mind anti-climactic but I guess to some that would be rather climactic...anyway I'm anxious to see others reactions to her cutting, everyones got different view point. Adriane's thoughts before she got out the razor were interesting too, how she was thinking of Kara and Emily telling her not to do it. Very good chapter, update soon! ~Snowlia |
| Avalondancer95 2008-04-06 ch 19, | abuseZach to the rescue! hopefully... |
| Wish the Pain Away 2008-04-06 ch 19, | abusenice. |
| Draelya 2008-04-06 ch 19, | abuseWow. Feel the angst. Crazy, man. I seriously can't believe I had time to read this with all this play stuff going on. Last show's today. Then it's done. Woo...Uh...Yeah. I think I said everything I wanted to...and more. Look how articulate I am. Sometimes I find it hard to believe I wrote a story that has over 200 reviews. *facepalms* Oh, well. See you at school, my ekiyuu (Jap: good friend). Ja ne! |
| wolf_firez 2008-04-05 ch 18, anon. | abuseSome chapters about Emily would be nice. Either then that, great chappie! XP |
| Death angel chick211 2008-03-29 ch 18, | abuseNice chapter I didn't know the song though.Anyway please write more.Talk to ya the next time I review(Or the next time you do) -Twirling Zakura |
| Draelya 2008-03-29 ch 18, | abuseWoo! Surprise! Love your CDs, BTW. If you've got anything else good, by all means, I'd love to hear them. I haven't updated my story lately either...Busy, busy, busy (Stupid play). Keep up the good work. Draelya out. |